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** This is the re-working of an old idea ... I hope you enjoy it! **

Wordsmiths, take heed ...

Letters of the alphabet,
By themselves are but harmless shapes
Of ink or graphite or digital information,
(Placed in ordered variations of ones and zeros),
But when combined in specific patterns and placement and propriety,

Become the most powerful weapons and tools known to humanity.
How many countless lives have been changed, worsened, improved,
Manipulated, darkened, brightened, ended, or even BEGUN,
As a result of their use by an intelligent mind and deft writing implement?
How much love, hate, kindness, vitriol, care, apathy,

Truth, hypocrisy, forgiveness, jealousy, joy, or even horror,
Has been carried to its mark by the thoughtful control
Of their placement and structure and management?
Oh, what horrible irony there is in the assumption that "words can never hurt" ...
They are, without a doubt, the most hurtful things ever created by man,

And yet their keen and acute ambiguity make them their own saviors,
And by positive application and intent,
Can be the most magnificent and wonderfully
Exquisite creations that we are capable of.
Be ever vigilant when you consider their organization and use,

For by their very nature you may be sending forth
A thoughtful work of fascination and beauty,
Or unleashing a monster of incalculable horror and venom.
WE are the bows that send the arrows forth,
WE are the guns that let loose the bullets,

WE are the catapults that let fly the burning stones,
But we are also the hands that pick the flowers,
That gently part the hair, that hold and caress with tenderness,
That encourage and help and touch and feel and explain and honor ...
ALL by the ways we form and group those individual letters of the alphabet,

ALL in the mindful ways we arrange
Those seemingly harmless little squiggles and lines ...
If we only treated words with the same care and respect and caution
That we allow weapons and miracles,
For they are easily as wonderful ...

And easily as dangerous.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/4/2017 8:01:00 PM
wow ...wonderful
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/5/2017 12:34:00 AM
I'm happy you liked it, Sonya - thank you so very much! Blessings! :-)
Date: 8/4/2017 8:41:00 AM
Hi Greg, the letters of the alphabet so perfectly and beautifully arranged in your deep and thoughtful write. I so enjoyed reading your work this morning as always :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/5/2017 12:33:00 AM
Awww ... thank you SO much, Susan, it means a lot to know I helped brighten someone's day - thanks for taking a moment to let me know! Bless you, friend! :-)
Date: 8/4/2017 7:32:00 AM
one word: AWESOME ok two words: FAVE
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/5/2017 12:32:00 AM
Thank you VERY much, Maureen - you know how much I appreciate your kind comments! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 8/4/2017 5:08:00 AM
Wow! This is a wonderful post! I really enjoyed reading this magnificent poem this morning! You have impressed me by the easy flow of your write, you have written this in seeming fluidity, a masterful piece, Great Work!! PS, love the picture, it's beautiful!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/4/2017 5:18:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Russell, I greatly appreciate the kind words, and I'm pleased you liked this piece! I hope you'll take a moment to read some of my other work as well, as I believe it is on a comparable level. Blessings, my friend! :-)
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