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Break and Repair

Bah, rake together the bloody pieces, if you leave them lying about, they stain. Any good, that memories hold, decreases, as does future joy you hope to obtain. Embrace solitary stillness, silence. Rediscover a solid foundation. Gladness can thrive in romance’s absence. Expired connections lead to damnation. Clean up wretchedness before it bitters killing chances before you are aware. Forge yourself into a net that glitters. Leave the pain and sorrow to just reap air.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/14/2012 4:45:00 PM
Brittany ,, Congratulation, with your featured poem of the week, have yourself a great day inspired by "YOU!" wishing you the best holidays 2 come ;-) always ~PD
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Date: 10/27/2012 10:35:00 AM
Congrats on a piece that stands out regardless of a contest or not. Love it. Hugs Michael
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Date: 10/25/2012 5:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem winning in ~SKAT~'s "Brokenness" contest Brittany. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2012 1:17:00 AM
CONGRATS BRITTANY ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS AMAZING PIECE ON THEME LUV ..
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Date: 10/24/2012 5:27:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Brittany. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2012 4:59:00 AM
Interesting piece here...We can always get back up and try again!! Would love for you to write more..regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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