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You said you're miserable, I said I am too, Breaking down on the last syllable. Tears broke out later When I realised I will always love you, No matter what I lose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/27/2012 4:05:00 PM
beautifully written, each sentence very nicely put in order:
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Date: 4/28/2012 12:21:00 PM
'...no matter what I lose.' There is sadness, yet a glimmer of redeeming faith and hope. So few lines, so much deep emotion... bittersweet. Thank you for this... it will resonate with many, the aim of enduring poetry.
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Date: 4/19/2012 9:44:00 AM
The sun is shining bright here this morning in Ohio and I am enjoying reading some very interesting and excellent writing. So happy to see yours among the ones I am able to read this fine day before I get busy. Have a wonderful day and thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us Annie. Love, Carol
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