Dan Cwiak Poet Free verse

Bread of Life

It was not too long ago when ....... MAN
was not always upright, but ........  DOES
that forgive arrogance? God has ... NOT
forgotten His children.  They .........LIVE
and work and love only ................ BY
His pleasure. His Son, the .............BREAD 
of life, will never leave us ............. ALONE

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James Inman November 12, 2015 at 11:17 AM Very clever write.

Skat A November 5, 2015 at 12:19 PM Dan, Congratulations on your End Line Win. LOVE SKAT

Sara Kendrick November 5, 2015 at 11:55 AM Congrats!! Great end line..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 4, 2015 at 11:21 PM Congrats on fine win Dan with this superb write!

Robert Lindley September 28, 2015 at 9:40 PM My friend, I was blessed to have found this poem tonight. Creativity and message are both tops. This is indeed a quality write! A very solid 7 from me.. Dan Cwiak September 28, 2015 at 9:43 PM Thanks, Robert. I glad it was meaningful to you.

Daire Kia August 30, 2015 at 2:32 PM very original style, also truth is sweet to the ears or eyes as the case may be, well done, hope to see more interesting innovations, peace and God bless Dan Cwiak September 14, 2015 at 12:57 AM Thanks, Daire. I hope people will be willing to open their hearts and souls, as I sometimes am want to do.