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Bread 

slicing melodies,
 guitar man
 butters up a song
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10-6-18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018
metaphormusichaiku

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J.W. Earnings
Date: 11/22/2018 8:34:00 PM
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Wonderful poem :) excellent job, writing it!
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/16/2018 8:20:00 AM
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Very creative, Joseph...and enjoyable! Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul
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Chris Green
Date: 10/15/2018 2:06:00 PM
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Nicely done. Congrats on your win
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/15/2018 4:52:00 AM
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I like humming and eating bread too, great haiku Joseph, congrats
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/14/2018 6:53:00 PM
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I like this. :) I also like bread and butter- soft guitar music too. Congratulations Joseph, on this win. ~ Brandy
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/14/2018 2:38:00 PM
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this was so well deserved! Congrats, my friend
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/14/2018 2:34:00 PM
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Most interesting, Joseph. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/14/2018 10:43:00 AM
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Congratularions for your win Joseph :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/14/2018 10:02:00 AM
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oh my , I can see how the guitar man could slice the melodies and make butter the songs :) great win
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 10/14/2018 9:40:00 AM
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I LOVE this. Thank you! Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/10/2018 5:36:00 PM
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wow, this is freaking awesome, Joseph. I think my favorite of all the ones I have seen!
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Winged Warrior
Date: 10/10/2018 10:29:00 AM
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Lovely haiku my friend...butter up!...love & light...^WW^
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 10/8/2018 7:51:00 AM
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Well done with a tasty metaphor, Joseph:)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/7/2018 3:04:00 AM
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Loved this , very original!!!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/6/2018 10:41:00 PM
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Metaphorically beautiful, Joseph. An awesome haiku! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 10/6/2018 6:45:00 PM
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Love your metaphor in this poem Joseph! : )
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/6/2018 3:39:00 PM
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Only a guitar man can do that..good one, Joseph.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/6/2018 12:29:00 PM
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Great one Joseph! I like it :)
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