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slicing melodies, guitar man butters up a song -- 10-6-18

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Date: 11/30/2018 7:11:00 PM
Hello Joseph may, you summed up your poetry very well.Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 11/22/2018 8:34:00 PM
Wonderful poem :) excellent job, writing it!
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Date: 10/16/2018 8:20:00 AM
Very creative, Joseph...and enjoyable! Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul
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Date: 10/15/2018 2:06:00 PM
Nicely done. Congrats on your win
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Date: 10/15/2018 4:52:00 AM
I like humming and eating bread too, great haiku Joseph, congrats
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Date: 10/14/2018 6:53:00 PM
I like this. :) I also like bread and butter- soft guitar music too. Congratulations Joseph, on this win. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/14/2018 2:38:00 PM
this was so well deserved! Congrats, my friend
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Date: 10/14/2018 2:34:00 PM
Most interesting, Joseph. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win.
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Date: 10/14/2018 10:43:00 AM
Congratularions for your win Joseph :)
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Date: 10/14/2018 10:02:00 AM
oh my , I can see how the guitar man could slice the melodies and make butter the songs :) great win
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Date: 10/14/2018 9:40:00 AM
I LOVE this. Thank you! Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Date: 10/10/2018 5:36:00 PM
wow, this is freaking awesome, Joseph. I think my favorite of all the ones I have seen!
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Date: 10/10/2018 10:29:00 AM
Lovely haiku my friend...butter up!...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 10/8/2018 7:51:00 AM
Well done with a tasty metaphor, Joseph:)
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Date: 10/7/2018 3:04:00 AM
Loved this , very original!!!
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Date: 10/6/2018 10:41:00 PM
Metaphorically beautiful, Joseph. An awesome haiku! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/6/2018 6:45:00 PM
Love your metaphor in this poem Joseph! : )
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Date: 10/6/2018 3:39:00 PM
Only a guitar man can do that..good one, Joseph.
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Date: 10/6/2018 12:29:00 PM
Great one Joseph! I like it :)
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