Home » Poems » Joseph May » Bread

Joseph May - Premium Member

Bread

slicing melodies,
 guitar man
 butters up a song
             --
10-6-18

Copyright © Joseph May | Year Posted 2018

metaphormusichaiku

♡Like0

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

David William Breidenthal

November 22, 2018 at 8:34 PM

Wonderful poem :) excellent job, writing it!

October 16, 2018 at 8:20 AM

Very creative, Joseph...and enjoyable! Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul

October 15, 2018 at 2:06 PM

Nicely done. Congrats on your win

Mystic Rose Rose

October 15, 2018 at 4:52 AM

I like humming and eating bread too, great haiku Joseph, congrats

October 14, 2018 at 6:53 PM

I like this. :) I also like bread and butter- soft guitar music too. Congratulations Joseph, on this win. ~ Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

October 14, 2018 at 2:38 PM

this was so well deserved! Congrats, my friend

October 14, 2018 at 2:34 PM

Most interesting, Joseph. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win.

October 14, 2018 at 10:43 AM

Congratularions for your win Joseph :)

October 14, 2018 at 10:02 AM

oh my , I can see how the guitar man could slice the melodies and make butter the songs :) great win

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 14, 2018 at 9:40 AM

I LOVE this. Thank you! Congratulations on your win! xomo

Andrea Dietrich

October 10, 2018 at 5:36 PM

wow, this is freaking awesome, Joseph. I think my favorite of all the ones I have seen!

October 10, 2018 at 10:29 AM

Lovely haiku my friend...butter up!...love & light...^WW^

October 8, 2018 at 7:51 AM

Well done with a tasty metaphor, Joseph:)

October 7, 2018 at 3:04 AM

Loved this , very original!!!

October 6, 2018 at 10:41 PM

Metaphorically beautiful, Joseph. An awesome haiku! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Connie Marcum Wong

October 6, 2018 at 6:45 PM

Love your metaphor in this poem Joseph! : )

October 6, 2018 at 3:39 PM

Only a guitar man can do that..good one, Joseph.

October 6, 2018 at 12:29 PM

Great one Joseph! I like it :)

Get a Premium Membership

Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.

Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace