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Brave Little Crab

Find me basking In the moon While I nurture my little ones In our sheltered lagoon I may seem hard on the outside But please don’t mis-take My shell is just a shield For my inside, soft as cake Yeah, I walk with a barrier But believe me, I’m not dense For one to know my true beauty Must speak politely to commence Romantically mysterious Keen to tradition Let me shine how much you’re valued And illuminate intuition Sentiment glows bright In my crustacean eyes If you’re close to my heart I will hold you with ties In cancerian claws you are safe From the dangerous road that life paves Etched in my heart you can see “Defender of Love” engraved Let me show you my stuff In the land of the free, and home of the brave Copyright © Miranda Lambert Written: 6/21/11 For Nette Onclaud’s contest: Zodiac Zones

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Date: 7/10/2011 8:11:00 AM
Wandering, a great job, very pleased to see an honorable win for you in Nette's contest. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/10/2011 7:42:00 AM
Congrats Randa on your fantastic win in Nette's contest with this dynamic delight in zodiac zones luv.. crabs are great people..my Mom was one and my grandson is one too..oh boy...
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Date: 7/10/2011 5:12:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of nette, Randa
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Date: 6/27/2011 6:34:00 AM
Excellent work..Telling of your personality by giving personification to the crab was a very creative touch..Enjoyed reading this morn..Reads like a winner to me.Good luck in the contest..Thanks for selecting my work to place in your contest..I am honored that you found it worthy..Sara
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Date: 6/21/2011 3:59:00 PM
I love it Miranda, how creative and wonderful does it get, best of luck in nette's contest with this gem~~
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Date: 6/21/2011 11:38:00 AM
I am cancer too but not a crab! A wonder ful write on an unusual subject......Elizabeth
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Date: 6/21/2011 11:04:00 AM
Interesting write. I'm a Cancerian too! Good luck in the contest! Regards, Robert.
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Date: 6/21/2011 10:57:00 AM
Very good, Miranda. Thrice I started writing an entry and thrice I binned it. Too difficult for me. This one is a shiner. Good luck in Nette's contest. :-)
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Date: 6/21/2011 10:56:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL its funny i just started writing and to say the things i say in my poetry i would never say to anyone i guess that's what it is all about putting your heart and true feelings into words and i see that in you poems thank you for the inspiration to write and your for awesome work
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