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Brave Little Campers

Brave little campers my how bold you are, sleeping out under the stars on a summer night so dear, taking in cool sweet air on a delightful evening until a crack of thunder brings a down pour among you, chasing you back inside to your warm beds. written 6-2-11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/3/2012 8:46:00 AM
Dear James, I read one of YOUR Comments to Anne Rutherford, YOU asked her to read this POEM, Excellence in "POETIC ART" I must Apologize, for YOU have made some very Inspiring Comments to my pen, I shamefully, did not Comment Back: What kind of "POETIC Brother, I Am? I was a Bear in Boy Scouts for my first "Brave Little Campers; Overnight same result - "a Thunderstorm. Thank-YOU for YOR Gracious Comments. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Eternal Liege ...Harry
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Date: 6/11/2011 4:27:00 PM
Sweet, I remember the days when our kids would do the same. Thanks for the memories James. Poetry will do that for us. Anne
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Date: 6/6/2011 4:54:00 AM
James, this one is so adorable and your images are just amazing.. I enjoyed this write of yours especially now that it is raining outside :)
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Date: 6/5/2011 9:22:00 PM
ah, this is adorable, those little kids out under the stars (until it storms) Oh, for the good old days!
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Date: 6/5/2011 7:01:00 PM
Enjoyed this read have a great day.
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James Foulk
Date: 6/5/2011 8:24:00 PM
thank you for reading and commenting on this poem.
Date: 6/4/2011 5:24:00 PM
think that would do it for me too James..that crack of thunder being outside.. awesome imagery my friend.. felt like I was there trying to get away luv.
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Date: 6/4/2011 1:20:00 PM
sweet little verse here james...always a pleasure to support poetic talent...and thank you for reading me today :-)
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Date: 6/4/2011 1:15:00 PM
Oh, this is so cute, James! It reminds me of the time I tried to pitch a tent in the backyard and my father came out at night making "Moo" noises. (As if a cow would scare me!) Thunder and lightning would have sent me racing back to the house though. Enjoyed! Love, Carolyn PS-Had a great time fishing. Posted photos on my blog.)
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Date: 6/4/2011 12:00:00 PM
really amusing and superbly scribed, james... thunder makes shiver even if we try to be brave..:) huggs, nette
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