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Brave: Gravity

Petals: pristine~pure desire float lullabies roam aspheric space touches reached just out of scope Brave: gravity glides on outspread wings with the willow weeping sullenly low blanket in balance a presence bestows Tight: comfort held in passion's show lightening a starless~sterile sky sacred secrets whispered overnight Dawn: feelings warmed on nature's bed dew drops glisten upon peril's view rhythmic swirls arise affectless anew

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Date: 2/19/2017 12:00:00 PM
Very nice, with this one Tim :)
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Date: 2/13/2017 5:20:00 PM
So glad I found your work, Tim. This is wonderful. A 7.
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Date: 2/9/2017 4:32:00 PM
Poetically done my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 2/9/2017 3:33:00 PM
Very much inspired, Tim...my favourite being stanza 3. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/9/2017 9:06:00 AM
Dazzling and profound definitions that makes one ponder dear, Tim! Excellently done!
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Date: 2/9/2017 8:44:00 AM
I love it :)
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Date: 2/9/2017 7:14:00 AM
This was beautiful Tim and I like the format of this as well. Nicely done.
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Date: 2/8/2017 11:25:00 PM
Dreamy images which make me smile. beautiful Tim!
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Date: 2/8/2017 8:52:00 PM
Very creative Tim, I loved the last verse.
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Date: 2/8/2017 5:10:00 PM
Your poem sings in vibrant colors that reach the soul Tim! Outstanding! 7 ; )
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Date: 2/8/2017 3:08:00 PM
- Four beautiful diamonds .... really enjoy, Tim - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/8/2017 3:11:00 PM
Thank you kindly A-L
Date: 2/8/2017 2:51:00 PM
So calm and beautiful..So very romantic Timothu.
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Date: 2/8/2017 2:55:00 PM
You would enjoy the scenic view...very romantic.
Date: 2/8/2017 2:27:00 PM
You have created some striking images here, Tim, and the poem flows beautifully. Hats off to you!
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Date: 2/8/2017 2:30:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn...I am listening to a piano concerto watching the snow fall out my window and was inspired.

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