Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Brave: Gravity

Petals: pristine~pure desire float
lullabies roam aspheric space
touches reached just out of scope

Brave: gravity glides on outspread wings
with the willow weeping sullenly low
blanket in balance a presence bestows

Tight: comfort held in passion's show
lightening a starless~sterile sky
sacred secrets whispered overnight

Dawn: feelings warmed on nature's bed
dew drops glisten upon peril's view
rhythmic swirls arise affectless anew

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Heidi Sands February 19, 2017 at 12:00 PM Very nice, with this one Tim :)

Agnes Krampe February 13, 2017 at 5:20 PM So glad I found your work, Tim. This is wonderful. A 7.

Winged Warrior February 9, 2017 at 4:32 PM Poetically done my friend...god bless...^WW^

Paul Callus February 9, 2017 at 3:33 PM Very much inspired, Tim...my favourite being stanza 3. ~ Regards // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis February 9, 2017 at 9:06 AM Dazzling and profound definitions that makes one ponder dear, Tim! Excellently done!

Abdullah Alhemaidy February 9, 2017 at 8:44 AM I love it :)

Chris Green February 9, 2017 at 7:14 AM This was beautiful Tim and I like the format of this as well. Nicely done.

Carol B. February 8, 2017 at 11:25 PM Dreamy images which make me smile. beautiful Tim!

Arthur Vaso February 8, 2017 at 8:52 PM Very creative Tim, I loved the last verse.

Connie Marcum Wong February 8, 2017 at 5:10 PM Your poem sings in vibrant colors that reach the soul Tim! Outstanding! 7 ; )

Anne-Lise Andresen February 8, 2017 at 3:08 PM - Four beautiful diamonds .... really enjoy, Tim - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Tim Smith February 8, 2017 at 3:11 PM Thank you kindly A-L

Charmaine Chircop February 8, 2017 at 2:51 PM So calm and beautiful..So very romantic Timothu. Tim Smith February 8, 2017 at 2:55 PM You would enjoy the scenic view...very romantic.

Carolyn Devonshire February 8, 2017 at 2:27 PM You have created some striking images here, Tim, and the poem flows beautifully. Hats off to you! Tim Smith February 8, 2017 at 2:30 PM Thanks Carolyn...I am listening to a piano concerto watching the snow fall out my window and was inspired.