Brat On Base

Beastly brat coddled
Daughter like mother
Father overcome
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 1, 2009 at 5:31 PM
This creates clear images in my mind. I have seen this situation and it is not pretty. Kids need lots of love but coddling is a whole nother ball game. Excellent Senryu my dear friend! Love Ya! Robin
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