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Brash and Bad Young Boys

brash and bad young boys
who waged war with firecrackers...
still count ten fingers

childhoodfunnysenryu

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July 5, 2010 at 3:36 PM

They are lucky. As a former ER nurse, I can attest that some are not as fortunate. Nice use of alliterations. Keep the poetry coming! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

July 4, 2010 at 4:54 PM

A dark side, here, but you always have such a great sense of humor, Tim! I'd have ranked it highly. Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

July 4, 2010 at 2:24 PM

It needs to go in both places Cher in the title line ...brash and bad young boys and in the body of the verse as line 1 fix it Cher. Ah yes you new it was a senryu! Hurrah! soup mail it's a VERY good one too about children! naughty boys LOL! a 7