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Brash and Bad Young Boys

brash and bad young boys who waged war with firecrackers... still count ten fingers

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Date: 7/5/2010 3:36:00 PM

They are lucky. As a former ER nurse, I can attest that some are not as fortunate. Nice use of alliterations. Keep the poetry coming! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/4/2010 4:54:00 PM

A dark side, here, but you always have such a great sense of humor, Tim! I'd have ranked it highly. Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/4/2010 2:24:00 PM

It needs to go in both places Cher in the title line ...brash and bad young boys and in the body of the verse as line 1 fix it Cher. Ah yes you new it was a senryu! Hurrah! soup mail it's a VERY good one too about children! naughty boys LOL! a 7

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/4/2010 7:45:00 AM

A nice entry. Good luck.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2010 12:26:00 AM

hahaha. VERY cute!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2010 9:53:00 PM

lol good one,, lucky those fingers need to keep away from them firecrackers,, good luck on the contest..P.D.