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* For my boy, Brandon, now 32 years old with kids of his own ... I love you so much, and I'm proud of what a big heart you have. *

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Brandon

They say ...
That babies don't smile
You were SO big when you were born - 11lbs 3ozs
And being VBAC, you had been through a lot in the birth canal

So you looked like a prize fighter after a heavyweight bout
Red and purple and bruised-looking, eyes squinted
You made no sounds, though ...
No crying or newborn complaints of any kind

You were as calm and peaceful as if you'd done it a hundred times
Like it was just another "first day of life"
They weighed you, cleaned you up
And then gave you to me to hold for the first time

They say babies don't smile
But you did ... oh, you certainly did
You opened your eyes and looked in mine
And smiled ... a lasting smile

Not a twisted cry or gas or mistaken expression
A true smile ... handsome, sweet, rugged
And I knew then you were special, very special
I knew then that I had witnessed ...

A miracle.
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Messina Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 1:21 PM
When I held my first born, it was I that cried...not he. Wonderful tribute Greg.
Barden Avatar
April 23, 2019 at 12:06 PM
Amen - I as well, Charlie - all three of them ... my life's best moments by far. Blessings, Brother! :-)
Awtry Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 11:38 PM
you made me cry because you made me remember holding my own newborns. Beautiful.
Barden Avatar
April 23, 2019 at 12:05 PM
Oh, thank you so much, PS, I'm so happy this brought some good memories and happy tears! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
One Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 7:10 AM
Lovely poem Gregory..
Barden Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 9:41 PM
Thank you, Silent One! :-)
Rv Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 2:47 AM
That is extremely beautiful in its simplicity; what a lovely tribute :))
Barden Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 9:41 PM
That's very kind of you, Sneha, thank you so much! :-) <3
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