Brand New Sheets

Since am talking about sheets, i'll try not to talk about sex
And even better, i'll try not to talk about Alex
The dj that rocked my old sheets, every sec
He was quite an exciting one with all kinds of sets
He came dressed in a no sleep fashion, what an ex
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Mumo Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 12:50 AM
Powerful natural rhyme. You have yet untapped poetic potential. It is evident in your ambitious diction. I advise you hone it to a pencil-point by apprenticing yourself to the masters of the superior craft.
Hunjeri Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 5:54 AM
And I'll heed your advice. Thank you Mumo
Dillenbeck Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 9:13 PM
Playful yet precise Nice slice Some spice Thx for sharing, and for your comment on the old RNA Dance Gerald Oliver
Hunjeri Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 5:52 AM
Thank you for the visit Gerald
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