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Brand New Gig

There once was a character named Eli Who really loved the fourth of July He thought he was a stud His fireworks were a dud So he got a new gig and moved to Thai 7-5-19 Alexis Y * Happy Belated Fourth Of July

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/7/2019 5:11:00 PM

Maybe over there, this guy can light them on his thigh! lol. Enjoyed. :) gw

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/7/2019 1:07:00 AM

Hi Alexis, loved your limerick, a fun read, but don't like people who think they are a stud, so glad he moved to Thai, hope he stays there! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/6/2019 12:46:00 PM

Let's hope his fireworks are more explosive in Thailand lol