Alexis Y. Poet Limerick

Brand New Gig

There once was a character named Eli
Who really loved the fourth of July
He thought he was a stud
His fireworks were a dud
So he got a new gig and moved to Thai






















7-5-19
Alexis Y

* Happy Belated Fourth Of July

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Gershon Wolf July 7, 2019 at 5:11 PM Maybe over there, this guy can light them on his thigh! lol. Enjoyed. :) gw

Jennifer Proxenos July 7, 2019 at 1:07 AM Hi Alexis, loved your limerick, a fun read, but don't like people who think they are a stud, so glad he moved to Thai, hope he stays there! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Tom Cunningham July 6, 2019 at 12:46 PM Let's hope his fireworks are more explosive in Thailand lol