Bramazing Duke Part 2

I just came to realize that YOU R someone special…you won a fraction of my heart…in a friendship way just to clear things up a notch..can you be my pal forever? I’m sic and tird of feeeeeelin a-lown… plz save me from society – shortening words that are losing its touch of…meening… we just say words like nothing many-a-time…shush, commotion in the background…I hear my niece cry and I don’t know why I fly like a bird, caught in the wind of flight…mend my wings for a minute or two if you do have it, oh Lord of Accord…I want to have a good connection with Duke and I’m not sure what religion he is – what is your religion, computer pal? Can you tell me on the comments below? Okay..thanks!
Now – I’ve changed my style of writing altogether now and forevermore…I’m a different David…I’m in a strange phase…or is “outlandish” a good enough term to use? I dunno *shrug* but anyways (heh), you are wise and I’d like to meet you and get to know you..I am going to stay in contact with you – I need someone to watch over me, you know, and you seem to be that type that I can rely on and put some of my weight in your carriage…
No…I don’t like feeling ignored, but I do feel that way everyday – maybe you and I can talk about it when the time is right…email me, friend, okay?

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Date: 11/23/2014 8:55:00 AM
David, the feeling is mutual. Can you watch over me too? I sometimes need the supervision. You are such a kindness that I am just in your debt. This is like being in an updraft.
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