Brakes Screech

brakes screech -- a large ginger cat runs across a road

for Constance's monoku contest, 15th December
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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March 15, 2014 at 10:09 AM
Jack, .. Congratulations with your one amazing line....~SKAT~
Callus Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 6:53 AM
halt...say no more...this is a winner!
Puddifoot Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 5:37 PM
a piece of reality here, spot on form, full of impact (literally!) but I hope the poor 'puddi' cat escaped! congrats on your 1st place win :)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 5:04 PM
Eight more lives to go. I enjoyed this winning piece Jack. Congrats.
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 5:00 PM
Y'ayyyy it's my chum Jack again on another winners' list. BIG congrats.
Andresen Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 4:42 PM
- One Amazing Line - Congratulations on your fine win, Jack ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 4:18 PM
Wow!!! Way to go ..SK
Richards Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 2:57 PM
Oh........this is so true to life.. well done, Jack !! A pleasure to share a placement with you! Congrats to you!
La France Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 2:49 PM
Congratulations on first place in my contest, sorry for the long delay in judging but as you know I have been having some eyesight problems, Constance
Hamilton Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 7:03 PM
Jack this is excellent enjoyed reading it Shadow x smile hug
Kendrick Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 5:44 AM
Reads like a winner..Sara
Sivey Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 9:24 PM
A quick and brilliant write here, such a wonderful Monoku my friend! I truly loved reading this lovely poem this evening! You have mastered the Monoku in my mind! What a delightful thought, you saved the cat from dying Jack! Great Work!!
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 9:24 PM
hey, now THIS Is quite the vivid image, my friend. Glad you didn't make it black like my beloved Razzmatazz!!!
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