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Brakes Screech

brakes screech -- a large ginger cat runs across a road

for Constance's monoku contest, 15th December

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Skat A

Date: 3/15/2014 10:09:00 AM

Jack, .. Congratulations with your one amazing line....~SKAT~

Paul Callus

Date: 3/12/2014 6:53:00 AM

halt...say no more...this is a winner!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/10/2014 5:37:00 PM

a piece of reality here, spot on form, full of impact (literally!) but I hope the poor 'puddi' cat escaped! congrats on your 1st place win :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/10/2014 5:04:00 PM

Eight more lives to go. I enjoyed this winning piece Jack. Congrats.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2014 5:00:00 PM

Y'ayyyy it's my chum Jack again on another winners' list. BIG congrats.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/10/2014 4:42:00 PM

- One Amazing Line - Congratulations on your fine win, Jack ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2014 4:18:00 PM

Wow!!! Way to go ..SK

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/10/2014 2:57:00 PM

Oh........this is so true to life.. well done, Jack !! A pleasure to share a placement with you! Congrats to you!

Constance La France

Date: 3/10/2014 2:49:00 PM

Congratulations on first place in my contest, sorry for the long delay in judging but as you know I have been having some eyesight problems, Constance

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/15/2013 7:03:00 PM

Jack this is excellent enjoyed reading it Shadow x smile hug

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/15/2013 5:44:00 AM

Reads like a winner..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/14/2013 9:24:00 PM

A quick and brilliant write here, such a wonderful Monoku my friend! I truly loved reading this lovely poem this evening! You have mastered the Monoku in my mind! What a delightful thought, you saved the cat from dying Jack! Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2013 9:24:00 PM

hey, now THIS Is quite the vivid image, my friend. Glad you didn't make it black like my beloved Razzmatazz!!!

Brakes Screech

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