Brain Quakes

The entire world starts to shake,  uncontrollable every which way
A terrible event,  first one ever,  eyes unfocused,  body quivers
Balance banished toward the floor,  clenched teeth blood bitten tongue
Ground no memory anymore, though said my body looked possessed
Guttural sounds in escaped breath,  foaming mouth dripping lips
Time escaped no measurements,  choking on life itself
Finally the quaking stops, eyes open in unknown blurriness
Body weightless drifting above,  fingers and toes clenched in claws 
Wracked with multiple after shocks,  confused about what it was
Paramedics arrived in 911, rushed in an emergency red lights above
Thoughts thinking but unable to recall,  waiting alone in hospital rooms
Wheeled down into this room that holds a large tunnel white tomb
Feeling that death loomed,  sometime very, very way too soon
My 40 year first seizure, my 40 year brain cancer the news
All my lifes luck used when I heard days later, benign tumor
And still running on that same luck today...



12/29/18
For Contest: Brain Brevity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/30/2018 3:26:00 PM
gosh, i looked down and saw this actually happened to you for real.That is very scary, Brian. I do hope your luck does not run out. LIke Jan said, I think your imagey was great. IT brought us right in!
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Brian Davey
Date: 12/30/2018 8:11:00 PM
Scary is an understatement, thank you Andrea
Date: 12/29/2018 3:15:00 PM
such vivid imagery, I got chills reading your poem Brian as I know others who have had tumours and their experiences are so similar. good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Brian Davey
Date: 12/29/2018 4:59:00 PM
Thank you it was a very lovely feeling of helplessness
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