Boy's Howl Tonight

Runaways kicking cans 
down the street, singing
haunting tunes to a
wolfmans moon.

03/09/14   written by, Larry Berdoo
                       WRITE ON!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Jerden Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 4:40 PM
Very interesting imagery, almost like a haiku except for the length. Good job!
Berdoo Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 6:56 PM
Thanks Roy, Learning as I read others poems. I like the soup, they are down to earth here.
Deschler Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 7:46 PM
Boys will be boys! I was a tomboy when I was a kid, so this sounds like fun to me! I very much enjoyed this poem, Larry. Well done!...Thank you for the kind comments on my poem.
Berdoo Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 5:07 PM
Excuse my manners, I was new then. Thank you Kelly.
Alexander Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 1:52 PM
I like the carefree attitude that this poem speaks. Short and brief feeling of freedom. Great write.
Berdoo Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 5:09 PM
Thanks Michael, for your kind reply. Like your poems also. ~~WRITE ON!~~
A  Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 11:50 PM
Hi Larry, love the imagery. I love kicking rocks. However, if I heard a tune-in sound that howls. I'd run away. Fun to read. SKAT
Berdoo Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 5:12 PM
Thank you SKAT, your one of the first to welcome me here, thanks I don't forget. Your a classey Lady with much talent. ~~WRITE ON!~~
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