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Boy Wonder

he’s a wind up toy an energizer bunny twinkling Christmas light 12/12/2016 The Troika (Haiku with hooves) contest Sponsored by: John Lawless

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Charlie Smith

Date: 1/17/2017 1:19:00 PM

Great work Kim, congratulations...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2017 1:35:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie!

Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/14/2017 10:37:00 PM

A twinkling Haiku you have penned. Congratulations, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2017 10:38:00 PM

Thank you, Afzal!

Sonia Walker

Date: 1/14/2017 8:12:00 PM

Kim, congratulations on your win. Your Haiku is a whimsical read. Hugs to you. ~ Sonia

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2017 8:53:00 PM

Thank you, Sonia! :)

Deborah Burch

Date: 1/14/2017 5:49:00 PM

Congratulations!!! Kim!! Well done sweet friend!! Big Hugggs!!:) deb

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2017 5:54:00 PM

Thanks so much, Deborah! Hugs to you!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 1/14/2017 5:41:00 PM

So very cute, Kim! Congrats on your win ... CayCay

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2017 5:55:00 PM

Thank you, CayCay!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 1/14/2017 3:07:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2017 5:57:00 PM

Thank you, Agnes!

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 1/14/2017 2:50:00 PM

And we don't want to meet his twin, not in the same room anyway. Picturesque piece for Christmas. Congratulations, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2017 6:00:00 PM

Thank you, Reason!

John Lawless

Date: 1/14/2017 1:17:00 PM

Kim, this is "pissa"....I think it defines all of us surrounded by family at christmas

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2017 2:29:00 PM

Thank you so much for the second-place win!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2017 2:26:00 PM

Thank you, John!

Afzal Nusker

Date: 12/13/2016 11:34:00 AM

Excellent entry for the contest, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2016 4:06:00 PM

Thank you, Afzal!

Tim Smith

Date: 12/12/2016 11:23:00 AM

A great descriptive haiku Kim...good luck

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/12/2016 11:23:00 AM

Thank you, Tim! :)

CayCay Jennings

Date: 12/12/2016 11:00:00 AM

This is great! CayCay

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/12/2016 11:04:00 AM

Thank you, my friend! Hugs!