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BOY WONDER

he’s a wind up toy an energizer bunny twinkling Christmas light
12/12/2016 The Troika (Haiku with hooves) contest Sponsored by: John Lawless

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Date: 1/17/2017 1:19:00 PM
Great work Kim, congratulations...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2017 1:35:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie!
Date: 1/14/2017 10:37:00 PM
A twinkling Haiku you have penned. Congratulations, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2017 10:38:00 PM
Thank you, Afzal!
Date: 1/14/2017 8:12:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win. Your Haiku is a whimsical read. Hugs to you. ~ Sonia
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2017 8:53:00 PM
Thank you, Sonia! :)
Date: 1/14/2017 5:49:00 PM
Congratulations!!! Kim!! Well done sweet friend!! Big Hugggs!!:) deb
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2017 5:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, Deborah! Hugs to you!
Date: 1/14/2017 5:41:00 PM
So very cute, Kim! Congrats on your win ... CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2017 5:55:00 PM
Thank you, CayCay!
Date: 1/14/2017 3:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2017 5:57:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes!
Date: 1/14/2017 2:50:00 PM
And we don't want to meet his twin, not in the same room anyway. Picturesque piece for Christmas. Congratulations, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2017 6:00:00 PM
Thank you, Reason!
Date: 1/14/2017 1:17:00 PM
Kim, this is "pissa"....I think it defines all of us surrounded by family at christmas
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2017 2:29:00 PM
Thank you so much for the second-place win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2017 2:26:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 12/13/2016 11:34:00 AM
Excellent entry for the contest, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2016 4:06:00 PM
Thank you, Afzal!
Date: 12/12/2016 11:23:00 AM
A great descriptive haiku Kim...good luck
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/12/2016 11:23:00 AM
Thank you, Tim! :)
Date: 12/12/2016 11:00:00 AM
This is great! CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/12/2016 11:04:00 AM
Thank you, my friend! Hugs!