Boy Wonder

he’s a wind up toy an energizer bunny twinkling Christmas light
12/12/2016 The Troika (Haiku with hooves) contest Sponsored by: John Lawless
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Smith Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 1:19 PM
Great work Kim, congratulations...
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 1:35 PM
Thank you, Charlie!
Nusker Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 10:37 PM
A twinkling Haiku you have penned. Congratulations, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 10:38 PM
Thank you, Afzal!
Walker Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 8:12 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win. Your Haiku is a whimsical read. Hugs to you. ~ Sonia
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 8:53 PM
Thank you, Sonia! :)
Burch Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 5:49 PM
Congratulations!!! Kim!! Well done sweet friend!! Big Hugggs!!:) deb
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January 14, 2017 at 5:54 PM
Thanks so much, Deborah! Hugs to you!
Godwin Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 5:41 PM
So very cute, Kim! Congrats on your win ... CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 5:55 PM
Thank you, CayCay!
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January 14, 2017 at 3:07 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 5:57 PM
Thank you, Agnes!
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January 14, 2017 at 2:50 PM
And we don't want to meet his twin, not in the same room anyway. Picturesque piece for Christmas. Congratulations, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 6:00 PM
Thank you, Reason!
Lawless Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 1:17 PM
Kim, this is "pissa"....I think it defines all of us surrounded by family at christmas
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 2:29 PM
Thank you so much for the second-place win!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 2:26 PM
Thank you, John!
Nusker Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 11:34 AM
Excellent entry for the contest, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 4:06 PM
Thank you, Afzal!
Smith Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 11:23 AM
A great descriptive haiku Kim...good luck
Rodrigues Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Thank you, Tim! :)
Godwin Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 11:00 AM
This is great! CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Thank you, my friend! Hugs!
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