Boy Meets Girls

One night at a party,
A guy comes up to a girl,
Asks her if she wants to dance
And says she completes his world.

Two years later, the same boy,
Texts a girl and pushes send,
Saying, "Do you believe in love at first sight,
Or should I walk by again?"

Five years later, same stupid boy,
At a club, gazing at another honey
Moved closer to her and whispered,
"If beauty were time, you'd be eternity."

Ten years down, same but older boy,
Said,"If you were my secret, you'd be a keeper",
The angry chicks jumped and slapped him and,
Whispered,"If you were my pet, I'd call you Creeper."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Matheny Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 3:01 PM
OMFG!!! I love it!!! It's so CUTE!!
Higgins Avatar
October 31, 2008 at 4:24 PM
That is wonderfully done. There is magic in this piece. I like how it flows from stanza to stanza with ease. Lovely write.
Fawcett Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 2:24 AM
Great write Amber. You made me laugh with this one, while at the same time seeing the reality of the message that inspired the poem. I am really enjoying this journey through your work. Love, Nigel
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