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She is a flesh devouring fairy who feasts on children who dont' wash their hands and primp their toes Darkly inclined she lives in the shadows, once bitten you will turn as evil as her extra long snubby nose Her name is Darkelina and she snickers to herself she owns spidery fingers and her teeth are razor sharp Sponge em' down, disinfect, scour them clean or else she will cleave your little pinkie and stitch it to her harp Darkelina Pixie-Meana thats what they call her Heh ! better wash it or hide it before she finds you child Gloomy and morose with a dark disposition, its her way better tuck them under the covers, for she is crazy wild Beyond the twitch of night she can give you such a fright shes got teeth with jagged edges, boy how she loves to bite !

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Date: 5/28/2025 10:27:00 PM
EEks! Lol, geez Mystic Rose, I guess if this were a bedtime story little children would add yet another line to the bedtime routine besides "I want a drink of water!" "I need to go potty!" After this tale it would be "I need another bath, mommy, did you wash the bathtub with bleach?"
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Date: 5/27/2025 7:43:00 PM
Wow, that's a great motivator to clean up - pretty scary!
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Date: 5/27/2025 10:56:00 AM
nice scary fantasy tale.
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Date: 5/27/2025 9:23:00 AM
Loved this fantasy of a fairy. This looks to me as a sonnet.
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Date: 5/27/2025 9:18:00 AM
Hello Rose this is a brilliant write and an enjoyable read. Loved it. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 5/27/2025 2:51:00 AM
- I think you're describing my sister... she loved to bite me as a child... but, she had clean hands :) - Love it, Vie Rose :) - hugs
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Date: 5/26/2025 4:33:00 PM
THIS IS SLAM DOWN EXCELLENT. Loved every bit it of it. Darkelina - how cool. You delivered. The part about 'tuck them under covers' speaks to me, that was my nightmare MO when little. I had to deal with fear as often appeared from my brother on the top bunk and the cowboy and alligator I was sure lived under my bed. You entertained me, dahling ... CayCay
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Date: 5/26/2025 6:34:00 PM
lol when we are kids we have many fears Cay, some of the are remembered until the day we die. Thanks for being so animated when you leave a comment, you made me smile.

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