Boy Are You Slow

look ancient creatures
marching through millennia
at slow steady pace








Tribute To Turtles  LOL
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Brown Avatar
February 7, 2009 at 12:14 PM
your title was awesome and then the haiku was a surprise. LOL...thanks for that. Great imagery...no waste of words here. Keep doing what you're doing! :-)
Malebranche Avatar
December 27, 2008 at 3:38 PM
I love it...very cute...lol
Winter Avatar
December 26, 2008 at 8:05 AM
~lol~ Hope your Christmas was beautiful for you and precious Jenny! Once again your titles rock! An awesome tribute to slow but amazing creatures! Love, Shar
Degenhardt Avatar
December 26, 2008 at 8:05 AM
This has the perfect Haiku form and offers the clarity needed to truly see the subject. A wonderful write. Michael
Richards Avatar
December 26, 2008 at 7:36 AM
Well done....a charming little haiku! ~ Carrie
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