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Boy Are You Slow

look ancient creatures marching through millennia at slow steady pace Tribute To Turtles LOL

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/7/2009 12:14:00 PM
your title was awesome and then the haiku was a surprise. LOL...thanks for that. Great imagery...no waste of words here. Keep doing what you're doing! :-)
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Date: 12/27/2008 3:38:00 PM
I love it...very cute...lol
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Date: 12/26/2008 8:05:00 AM
~lol~ Hope your Christmas was beautiful for you and precious Jenny! Once again your titles rock! An awesome tribute to slow but amazing creatures! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/26/2008 8:05:00 AM
This has the perfect Haiku form and offers the clarity needed to truly see the subject. A wonderful write. Michael
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Date: 12/26/2008 7:36:00 AM
Well done....a charming little haiku! ~ Carrie
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