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Boy. Our first boy, boy. My namesake, boy. Fetch my tools, boy. Cry beating belt, boy. Make me proud, boy. Ignore my cruelty, boy. War's killing eats us, boy. Comes home each night, boy. Never mind the misery, boy. She smiled at you, Boy!

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Date: 3/6/2024 6:41:00 AM
Dear William, What a poignant portrayal of the complexities of father-son relationships, encapsulating love and pain. Your poem delves deep into the layers of emotions, highlighting the struggles and expectations imposed on the boy. Your words evoke empathy and introspection, leaving a lasting impact on me, the reader. This is a powerful piece of poetry. - Blessings, Daniel
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