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Boy

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She warms my heart
I'm not sure how
She lights a fuse
And soon.. kerpow!

My love it swells
Her voice 
Like angels' clanging bells

She wakes me up
I feel alive
Her face a feast
On which I thrive

Such lovely jawline
Perfect skin
Her posture
Perfect mannequin

I love her walk
I love her clothing
Find something wrong?
I see no thing

Her curves delight
We chat so long 
Into the night

Her arms entwine
Her hands just beauty
In beastly mine

I've never liked someone like this
My heart beat falters
As lips I kiss

Balcony we sit
As shoulders touch
I like this girl
Says boy

So much

Copyright © Christopher Grieves | Year Posted 2023

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Ink Empress Date: 10/9/2023 3:40:00 AM Perfect mannequin! What a beautiful write this is. I can see why this won first! Brilliant and passionate and such smooth imagery throughout, i dont know this form but sounds like a good one to try! Congratulations and well deserved! I love the presentation too! So good Login to Reply Christopher Grieves Date: 10/9/2023 5:32:00 AM Thank you, Ink. I am not a purist so no form.. but it was from the heart, I hope that counts :)) So nice of you to stop by.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian Date: 8/31/2023 8:21:00 PM Enjoyed this very much, and like your voice. Congrats! Login to Reply Christopher Grieves Date: 8/31/2023 10:51:00 PM Barbara, thank you, that is very kind. I did get wrapped up in the image a little..

Unseeking Seeker Date: 8/17/2023 12:49:00 AM soul speak from the heart ~ warmest congratulations on your top win, Chris Login to Reply Christopher Grieves Date: 8/17/2023 2:51:00 AM From the heart indeed! Many thanks :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/16/2023 8:58:00 PM Brilliant work, Christopher, congratulations:) you have a great voice:) Login to Reply Christopher Grieves Date: 8/17/2023 2:51:00 AM Joanna - that is very lovely of you to say so. Thank you for your very kind words :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/16/2023 12:30:00 PM Congratulations, Chris! I loved listening to this. So wonderfully spoken! Hugs ~ Kim Login to Reply Christopher Grieves Date: 8/17/2023 2:50:00 AM I am very grateful for your encouragement, Kim x Thank you!