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Bow's Beginning

Mighty moon spreads shine on surface, but cunning clouds cover his face. Tears, dive down to ground, and I silently seek the sound. Comes creepy crow and sings sad song to make me sleep on lost Lovable member's stone, but blind boys only weep. Mum, don’t leave your drop, at this time steep. I am falling, calling for help, drowning in dark desert, deep. You heard, when I cried in daylights, to turn on light; Hear again, and don’t leave, to shine among stars bright. Though at hurt heart's height I know dark is right; but I beg, don’t leave, believe, wake up, my sight. Tears stop and colour, blind eyes, the moon bow's circle in sky; Tears stop and now I know, that wasn’t the last goodbye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 8/3/2024 10:57:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/25/2022 6:15:00 AM
Hello Lochan Chugh oh! This is delightful! Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 10/16/2020 8:11:00 AM
I can feel the angst and the pain in your poem...
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