Bow Down To Storm To Rise Upto Norm

Bow Down to Storm, To Rise up to Norm In praying position as the religion directs, bow down to storm As god’s judgement, can’t avoid, have to weather it as the norm. Will the storm breed life or decay and destroy is the question? Will one be able to gather the strength to rebuild and refreshen? Night ends day begins, day ends night begins, is a cycle of life Bad will be cleared by good, to cycle bad again put more strife Don’t cry anymore if in life you have to face hardships of love But one must try to forget hardships consorted with life thereof. The conflict between life and decay will soon come to an end And the flowers of life will soon grow and blossom in the end. The aftermath of hardships is like the aftermath of the storm Only way to face them is to rise, to reconstruct and to reform.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Date 12-22-13 Second place win Contest: After the Storm by Shanity Rain

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Date: 12/29/2013 11:17:00 AM
very nicely written Dr. Ram, Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 12/28/2013 10:06:00 PM
Some things on this earth are much more powerful than we are, so we must weather the storm every now and then. And, hopefully when it has passed we can rebuild and start life over again. I really like the metaphors in this inspiring poem! Very well written, Dr. Ram! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you so much for the kind congrats on my poem!
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Date: 12/27/2013 9:04:00 PM
Congratz on your win Dr. Ram. Such a deep meaningful poem...
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Date: 12/27/2013 7:21:00 PM
Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 12/27/2013 2:42:00 PM
Excellent Poem ! Was very much a winner and had really hard time putting a number on such a fine write ! TY :) 2nd place
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Date: 12/23/2013 8:23:00 AM
- So well and deep written Dr. Ram - Wishing you and all yours a peaceful and happy Christmas - I hope that 2014 will be a year of friendship and peace. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/23/2013 6:17:00 AM
What a profound and deep poem. Thanks for posting. In life, no matter what, only the strong survive. Your last two lines are so true. When one says "I can't take anymore" is when one dies.
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Date: 12/23/2013 12:25:00 AM
thank you, but talk about deep being prone to that, this a deeper write
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