George Seal Poet Limerick

Bow and Arrow For Contest

There once was a young man from Barrow
   While shooting with his bow and arrow
   The arrow went twang
   Like a boomerang
   And damaged his little cock sparrow.


        4/ 27/ 2015.

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Casarah Nance April 30, 2015 at 5:36 PM :-D whoa poor..sparrow lol George Seal July 15, 2015 at 5:26 PM Thankyou Casara, i can see what you mean. It makes one's eyes water. Thanks for your reaction. George

Judy Konos April 30, 2015 at 9:27 AM Congrats on your win George Seal July 15, 2015 at 5:29 PM Thankyou Judy,i very much appreciate.yoursupport of my poem. Cheers. George.

Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2015 at 11:18 PM oh, this was a cute one!!! Congrats on your win. George Seal July 15, 2015 at 5:39 PM Hello Andrea, cute you say, more like acute for the man from Barrow. Thankyou so much once again for being so kind. So glad you liked it. George.

Kp Nunez April 29, 2015 at 8:02 PM Ouch! lol! Congrats George! Kim :) George Seal July 15, 2015 at 5:47 PM Hi Kim, good reply,it does hurt i know from my owm experience in Australia. But mine was a golf ball. Thankyou so much for commenting on my poem. I really do appreciate it. Cheers. George.

Eve Roper April 29, 2015 at 7:07 PM Hahaah..! Funny :~) Congratulations on your wonderful win. George Seal July 15, 2015 at 5:52 PM Hi Eve, thankyou for your visit and kind comments on my poem. So glad that you saw the funny side. Cheers . George.

Tim Smith April 29, 2015 at 5:39 PM Congrats George... Cheers George Seal July 15, 2015 at 5:56 PM Hello Tim, thanks for sending your congratulations to me for my poem. My kindest regards to you. George

Skat A April 29, 2015 at 5:24 PM NICE ONE GEORGE, Congratulations...... SKAT LOVE George Seal July 15, 2015 at 6:00 PM Hi SKAT, thankyou for being so kind once again you never let me down. George.

Poet Destroyer A April 29, 2015 at 4:54 PM George, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick Win.... LINDA George Seal July 15, 2015 at 6:06 PM Well LINDA, i have to thank you once more fot your most kind comments on my limerick. Cheers. George.

Jan Allison April 29, 2015 at 3:56 PM George - I thought this was extremely clever and got a 1st place in my first contest:-) Hugs jan xx George Seal July 15, 2015 at 6:11 PM Hello Jan, i am very happy to be placed in your first contest..thankyou so much for your most kindly comments too. George.