Nette Onclaud Poet Monoku

bouyant lily --monoku

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                 buoyant lily holds onto its  glimmer ... *))   against umbra of sky~
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CayCay Godwin May 9, 2025 at 9:54 PM very different, very enjoyable CayCay

Andrea Dietrich May 9, 2025 at 7:56 AM congrats with your monoku in Brian's contest. Let me see if you have some other new haiku up!

Crystol Woods May 9, 2025 at 7:07 AM Interesting images! Xo

James Marshall Goff May 9, 2025 at 3:32 AM Such poignant movement, FUN!

Daniel Henry Rodgers May 8, 2025 at 6:42 AM Dear Nette, How I just loved reading your buoyant monoku! You have a winner in my book. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Paige Hind May 7, 2025 at 5:32 PM Aw, so lovely- ! :) <3

Yann Rolland May 7, 2025 at 5:23 PM so creative, felt emotion, have a nice week end