Bountiful Banyans

They held goodness high like pillars of steel.
They were banyan trees that shook in no storm.
No burnout of the mind could break their zeal;
their love for life was beyond nature's norm.

They gave all that they had with no reserve—
self-sacrifice seemed to be their sole goal.
Who on earth could match them in inner verve?
As humans, did they play a steadfast role?

As true learners, they learned from all defeats.
They could break the walls that they themselves built.
Never did they take pride in their own feats;
with their wills, did they have an inner split?

To drop the earth is not to drop the race;
The unbowed spirit claims the cosmic space.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Godwin Avatar
March 22, 2026 at 6:02 AM
This is good writing; I loved the rhymes being tight, the flow steady, such delight - I was really into it, until the line ending with split broke the flow for me. BUILD/SPLIT don't rhyme, in time you'll notice & revise but you've a contest to place in NOW so I'm butting in, "THE WALLS BUILT WITH THEIR OWN GRIT' works, grit/split rhyme. I believe this VERY GOOD poem would near excellent, even place in a contest with a one-line revision. Good intentions, please don't be mad.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 9:45 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "The Avengers" write. "Good  Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day/week writing away............
Alex Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 7:13 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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