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Boundaries

I have some boundaries in place that you're not free to cross
so keep your distance where you are, or all will be at loss
It's only when my trust you gain, that you can come inside
Until that time, I must decline, and soul and feelings hide

For I'll not take a stranger in, my treasures I must keep
I've trusted many times before and for those times I weep
So, please respect my privacy and do not venture in
Perhaps in time, if all be well, my friendship you can win

My friends all know the joy that comes when loyalty is won
There are such pleasant happenings and fun under the sun
So, till that time when all is fine and secrets we can share
be sure to stick to boundaries, perhaps I'll meet you there.

Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lamoureux Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 8:46 AM
I am glad to count you as a friend. Hugs Rick.
Hicks Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 9:30 PM
The heart is a fickle thing ... whatever you allow in it can cause it to flourish or to close up. In this case, it's good to be cautious, and only let them in when they've earned the right to the key!
Godwin Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 10:19 PM
I love this. A beauty and a keeper - I so relate! Fav and 7 ... CayCay
Lamoureux Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 7:40 PM
Good for you, only let those who love and respect you to come close!
Manassian Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 10:09 AM
Yes, Richard. I am trying to do that. I really am. :) I am protective of my loved ones and friends. You know your place in this circle. Blessings.
Andresen Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 5:22 AM
- Lovely written - we share much in our poems, but not.... Everything ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 10:10 AM
:) Yes, Sunshine! You are right in what you say. Love you! :)
Bauer Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 4:11 PM
wonderful! you've conveyed this message very clearly and poetically, eileen!
Manassian Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 4:49 PM
Thanks, Ilene. As you age, you realize there is a lot less you are able to put up with. It upsets me when people want to befriend me out of curiosity. If there is a genuine interest, I'm usually quick to discern that...Thanks for the read. Hugs
Sage Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 3:49 PM
hmm, I hope time will wait till you come there, excellent write Eileen, excellent!
Manassian Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 4:50 PM
Thanks, WS. Also...thanks for pointing out that mistake in soupmail. I'm glad you noticed it, dear. Blessings.
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