Bound Hearts

(28/01/2012) 

I'll sweep your sadness
As you'll calm my restlessness
Such miraculous 

Weaved souls in one wreath
Together we, us as one
Bound hearts ‘till the death

For 'Romantic Senryu Contest'
Sponsored by: Francine Roberts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 14, 2014 at 9:40 AM
Hello Dinda, ~ ~ Did you really think I'd leave without stopping by to say Good-bye. Never, Muwahahahaha! Why the word alone sounds -forever and difficult. LOL, I love this place and the poets. A couple of soup friends and I are taking a short vacation. REMEMBER! The Best Thing About Leaving is the "RETURN." I will leave in good faith, in hopes you don't forget me, and you are looking forward in having me visit you and your poems in the future. HAHA, I will bring a new me when I return. "I Can't wait to see you again:) If you ever want me to read a certain poem or you wish to say hi... Drop by my E-Mail Address. [email protected] :) Sincerely yours ~Always & Forever~ The Sweet Poet Destroyer
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January 14, 2014 at 12:05 PM
Well P.D. how can i forget the sweetest and wittiest person like u? NEVER! :) Well i hope to see a lot of new poems inspired by your vacation. have a great journey and adventure, you foxy lady ;) and get back soon. love, dinda
Rhinem Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 11:50 AM
Smile ~ Look What Love Has Done ~ Melting Hearts Amid A Sea Of Light * Together As One ~ Beautiful ~ Love Always, John!:) ~
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April 17, 2012 at 8:40 AM
Very romantic write.Andrea .......there is one here at the soup...may be she or may not be...I mean Andrea Dietrich...read the comments below that poem.
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February 9, 2012 at 9:01 AM
I enjoyed your series Dinda, this made me smile ;) congratulations on your book as well! Tc Wilma
A   Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 8:27 PM
Good luck in the contest,,enjoyed stopping by tonight~ ;-) always,..pd.
Pettit Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 8:41 PM
Good senryu pair. It all looks good from here.
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January 29, 2012 at 8:29 PM
wow, it's a wedding vows in the making! love it, good luck on the contest Dinda
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January 29, 2012 at 4:18 PM
Lovely and sweet poem Dinda, I like it alot. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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January 29, 2012 at 10:12 AM
Very sweet, Dinda. And noticing your avatar picture up here, are you the cutie on the left?
A   Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 10:42 PM
Dindra, good luck in the contest,..pd
Rhinem Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 9:41 AM
Ps. Smile ˜ Thank you my sweeet beautiful girl * I really Dig your words ˜ My love, Always * John!:) ˜
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January 28, 2012 at 9:44 AM
... "SUCKLE SUCKLE" ...
Rhinem Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 9:06 AM
Smile ˜ Falling all over myself to lick your heart and taste your lips * I'll make it to the moon never have to crawl and, close your eyes and I'll kisss You * My love, always, John!:) ˜
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