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Bound By Convention

I engineered an intricate design,
determined to be action,
not thoughtful stasis.
But, isolate and distant --
a preserver of decorum --
formal, unexposed, and safe --
with bounds determined
by tight, sane strictures,
I did not struggle,
could not escape nor abandon place --
became, instead, a creature
habit-ridden:  a cousin
to the circus seal
that honks a horn
for fish.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 5:34 AM
Unique and fascinating! Wonderful phrasing and imagery. Well done, Larry! Best wishes, Keith
Horne Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 6:30 AM
Clever write indeed, Leo
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 3:58 PM
Cool poem, Leo...love it. Thanks for your kind comment today on my Wildflowers poem. Have a great weekend. Blessings, Rhonda
Sweetheart Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 1:55 PM
imaginative and most creative write Leo.. just getting into Free Verse and enjoyed these thoughts luv..
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 10:43 PM
wow, I loved the interesting way you ended this poem, a circus seal that honks a horn for fish. GREAT analogy, Leo!!
Meikle Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 5:42 PM
sometimes rules hamper action. most poets hate them and follow them. and sometimes not often but sometimes we use them. Well done!
Badmus Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 2:46 AM
"i did not struggle, could not escape nor abandon place..." nicely written, filled with beautiful ironies.i doubt if you really wanted to escape from the "formal, unexposed, and safe" place
Culverhouse Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 7:15 PM
had to read it twice but I found your work to be thought provoking and entertaining....my mind... mayhaps stimulated and revivied!! The CPR poet you will become!!
Squyres Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 12:46 PM
boundaries, structure, decorum. All three put strong limitations ... Habits are formulated with them. You said this so well within the verse. Enjoyed !!!
Cooper Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 3:06 PM
great free verse LEO!
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