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Bound By Convention

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I engineered an intricate design, determined to be action, not thoughtful stasis. But, isolate and distant -- a preserver of decorum -- formal, unexposed, and safe -- with bounds determined by tight, sane strictures, I did not struggle, could not escape nor abandon place -- became, instead, a creature habit-ridden: a cousin to the circus seal that honks a horn for fish.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/8/2012 5:34:00 AM
Unique and fascinating! Wonderful phrasing and imagery. Well done, Larry! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 3/11/2012 6:30:00 AM
Clever write indeed, Leo
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Date: 3/9/2012 3:58:00 PM
Cool poem, Leo...love it. Thanks for your kind comment today on my Wildflowers poem. Have a great weekend. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/9/2012 1:55:00 PM
imaginative and most creative write Leo.. just getting into Free Verse and enjoyed these thoughts luv..
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Date: 3/6/2012 10:43:00 PM
wow, I loved the interesting way you ended this poem, a circus seal that honks a horn for fish. GREAT analogy, Leo!!
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Date: 2/28/2012 5:42:00 PM
sometimes rules hamper action. most poets hate them and follow them. and sometimes not often but sometimes we use them. Well done!
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Date: 2/28/2012 2:46:00 AM
"i did not struggle, could not escape nor abandon place..." nicely written, filled with beautiful ironies.i doubt if you really wanted to escape from the "formal, unexposed, and safe" place
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Date: 2/27/2012 7:15:00 PM
had to read it twice but I found your work to be thought provoking and entertaining....my mind... mayhaps stimulated and revivied!! The CPR poet you will become!!
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Date: 2/25/2012 12:46:00 PM
boundaries, structure, decorum. All three put strong limitations ... Habits are formulated with them. You said this so well within the verse. Enjoyed !!!
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Date: 2/23/2012 3:06:00 PM
great free verse LEO!
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