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Born I was, still alive today, down, but I'll be back to say Even at a small age, when our house burnt to the ground Disorientated, confused, in it's smoke filled surround With no other place to go, to a Caravan we called our home It was the events after this, that allowed my mind to roam Little me playing in a field, on a broken bottle I fell Crimson fountains erupted, I survived, as I'm here to tell That Monday night so special, Boys Brigade we headed to be I tried to run faster, but my brother was faster than me Out of the opening he went, boy running, was he skilled He was there, but gone the next, knocked down, my brother killed My mind now in roam and wander, fathers health started to slide Where does a seven year old turn to, to whom does he confide Pillar to post I headed, fostered out, and to children's homes Six years later many more tears, my father in deathly roam To my father I kept my promise, to the Royal Navy I would go Whilst training, caught under a raft, my life nearing slow Pulled from the water was I, nearly drained of what little I had A release of water, a gasp of air, hours later feeling so glad Eventually what I'd always wanted, to be happy and family be Married to the girl whom I'd know, would love to marry me But to a colleague I'd declared my worries, of a phone call I'd take For History would repeat itself, to awaken to a possible wake That call finally arrived, to the telephone, speaking to my eldest son Liam his younger brother, knocked down, my tears in run I'm blessed that he was saved, which cancelled out that call I only wish that technology was, that I'd have a firewall This is me up to date, apart this last weekend Again I thought I lost my youngest, once again relieved of strain Hours up at the Hospital, the first human skull I've seen A serious cut to his head, but what it could have been This my life's chapter, around the corner we never know But all I can say to the above, around me continues to glow .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/15/2014 10:12:00 AM
Fertile ground for a poets mind. Congratulations.
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James Fraser
Date: 8/19/2014 3:28:00 PM
Thank you kindly Richard, always appreciated <*> James......
Date: 8/14/2014 7:41:00 PM
You always impress me with your writes, your stories tug at me, and to know you and getting to know you, you are so gifted and a treasure. Grats on your win, and thank you for sharing, I wish I could give you a great big hug.
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James Fraser
Date: 8/19/2014 3:10:00 PM
Thank you just doesn't seem enough for your always kind comments Casarah, always appreciated so much. Have a koolio day <*> James - hugs back :)
Date: 8/14/2014 8:13:00 AM
Tremendous n sad write Fraser! But bravo u cud deal wid all adverse,, god bless u n may u always retain ur glow! Big congrats on win!
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James Fraser
Date: 8/14/2014 3:56:00 PM
It's been a journey Upma, and my journey continues. Thank you for your always kind words, James.....
Date: 8/13/2014 10:12:00 AM
Thanks for sharing lifre's experiences, Fraser. congrats
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James Fraser
Date: 8/14/2014 3:46:00 PM
It's been some road which I've lived, and I'm more fortunate than others. Thank you Dr. Ram........
Date: 8/4/2014 10:25:00 AM
wow James life can have it scary moments of that there is no doubt, Bouncing back with your poetry James, we enjoy, many of us you give so much to...
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James Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 3:28:00 PM
Thank you kindly Harry, bouncing back I have done on quite a few occasions. It has made me stronger on the inside, but I know the cracks are slowly rising to the surface. By the time they do, I'll be in the 'Great Gig in the Sky' watching my favourite lost music heroes. Have a terrific weekend, good luck in this Football Season ;)
Date: 8/2/2014 5:31:00 PM
Cherish them James..Life is not guaranteed...Tim
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James Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 3:14:00 PM
That I have found out Tim, as have many others. Have a lovely weekend, James......
Date: 8/2/2014 5:07:00 PM
I know what you passed through ..and I am.so sad for what happened to your son,yet I am glad He made it.James,What doesn't kill us makes us stronger indeed.This biography goes to my fvs!!!
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James Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 3:08:00 PM
Hiya Charmaine, finally got time to play catch up. Yep, it's been quite a road, and it's gonna be smoother for my tomorrow's. A big thank you for all your lovely warm comments. My heart knows they don't go unnoticed. Have a lovely weekend, James xx

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