Bought and paid for

Saw it in the window.
Spoke to me deep in my soul.
Needed to take it home



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 3rd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Mcguire Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 1:03 AM
Great poem, I could write many stories from this little poem. It really opens your mind. And that is part of what poetry is all about.
Gauthier Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 1:17 AM
Thanks... and I look forward to reading each one, Timothy.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 12:56 PM
Which is exactly as it should be.
Gauthier Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 2:37 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.
Lawless Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 10:28 AM
OH, I like this Line, so devious a thought that i shall take it home and revisit it...probably too often. Nice.y done!!!
Gauthier Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 11:05 AM
Thanks for your delightful visit and comment, John.
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