Boughs In Autumn

green-flourish of boughs
advent of Autumn comes quick
aged fall can’t get up

8/30/2021

ageautumnsenryu

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Gershon Wolf

August 31, 2021 at 6:57 PM

Well-writ, my friend. ~ gw

Sara Kendrick

August 31, 2021 at 11:54 AM

Those beautiful leaves become nature's fertilizer for the next year. It is beautiful and a little sad to see the shedding of the leaves though. Enjoyed reading your work. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

August 31, 2021 at 2:06 PM

Thank you, dear one!

Paul Callus

August 31, 2021 at 5:27 AM

Both your nature senryu and accompanying visual are delightful, Kim. I can clearly see the difference between the proudly clothed and naked branches. ~ Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

August 31, 2021 at 9:04 AM

Thank you, Paul!