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Boudhanath Stupa

Hands brush
Against 
Spinning prayer 
Wheels
Gentle wishes 
Drift among
snap-happy 
Tourists
Who Forget
This moment


Joyful children 
dodging
Wandering priests
Met by 
Disapproval

Swaying flags
Teased
by the breeze
And 
The Stupa 
Towering above 
Us all

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/2/2017 11:07:00 AM
I think today the Buddha smiles. Nicely done, Keys. : )
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Date: 4/2/2017 12:50:00 AM
I really like how you structured this poem and the flag personification. Good job and welcome to poetrysoup!
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