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Boudhanath Stupa

Hands brush Against Spinning prayer Wheels Gentle wishes Drift among snap-happy Tourists Who Forget This moment Joyful children dodging Wandering priests Met by Disapproval Swaying flags Teased by the breeze And The Stupa Towering above Us all

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Date: 4/2/2017 11:07:00 AM
I think today the Buddha smiles. Nicely done, Keys. : )
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Date: 4/2/2017 12:50:00 AM
I really like how you structured this poem and the flag personification. Good job and welcome to poetrysoup!
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