Bottoms Up

P lease read the bottom first U nderstanding my thirst S orry to disappoint you M y lips are sealed I think O ther than my rootbeer T his man just doesn't drink T o tell the truth O r not B elieve it

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/12/2010 4:26:00 PM

Another clever offering, my friend. Ralph

Destiny Orschell

Date: 7/11/2010 10:57:00 PM

I saw the capital lets and i was lookin for the words in it then gave up and read the first line and got it. Very creative. Loved the poem. Loves, Destiny

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/11/2010 10:46:00 PM

Hi Larry :) You sure got me looking down first with this one-- ha ha which way is up and which way is down?? But loved how you played with this "bottoms up" first read-- pretty clever! btw I could relate-- I don't drink either ... nikko :)