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For young'uns out there, here's some advice Stay focused on the prize, you don't live twice Take advantage while here Impress all your peers Being the bestest souper pooper, always damn nice

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Date: 11/23/2017 8:56:00 AM
Am I young enough for advice?//If I am then it is nice//If I'm not//well, not so hot//Some of my wrinkles are reasonably nice. SOUPON JACKSON!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/23/2017 9:05:00 AM
How's YOUR bottom line btw? Mine's slim and trim! Getting kinda personal... sorry!!! Hmmm nice wrinkles???
Date: 11/23/2017 7:47:00 AM
Sweet words my friend :) xomo!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/23/2017 8:01:00 AM
As long as we try... xxx
Date: 11/23/2017 7:44:00 AM
Great advice my friend...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/23/2017 8:01:00 AM
I try to live by this... sometimes fall off the wagon! LOL

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