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For young'uns out there, here's some advice Stay focused on the prize, you don't live twice Take advantage while here Impress all your peers Being the bestest souper pooper, always damn nice
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Flats Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 8:56 AM
Am I young enough for advice?//If I am then it is nice//If I'm not//well, not so hot//Some of my wrinkles are reasonably nice. SOUPON JACKSON!!!
Ellison Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 9:05 AM
How's YOUR bottom line btw? Mine's slim and trim! Getting kinda personal... sorry!!! Hmmm nice wrinkles???
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 7:47 AM
Sweet words my friend :) xomo!
Ellison Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 8:01 AM
As long as we try... xxx
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November 23, 2017 at 7:44 AM
Great advice my friend...
Ellison Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 8:01 AM
I try to live by this... sometimes fall off the wagon! LOL
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