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Bottled Up

childhood destiny
therapeutic tears shed for
the spilling of milk



John G. Lawless

contest - In a Bottle
sponsor - A Poet Destroyer

darkhumorsenryu

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Dr.Ram Mehta

August 21, 2014 at 5:00 AM

Creative one. congrats on the win, John

Robert Lindley

August 20, 2014 at 10:03 PM

Congrats on your win my friend!!

Casarah Nance

August 20, 2014 at 9:26 PM

I sure know about spilled milk with a three year old running around. Great senryu John, grats on your win. No crying over spilled milk.

Mark Trichet

August 20, 2014 at 9:12 PM

remember it warming in the sun for us in primary school! crates of warm milk WELL DONE

Tim Smith

August 20, 2014 at 6:51 PM

yes remember the days well...congrats

David Mohn

August 20, 2014 at 6:05 PM

Very clever and deep John...congrats

Andrea Dietrich

August 20, 2014 at 3:09 PM

wow, this is one of the best I have seen so far. GREAT job. and congratulations

Poet Destroyer A

August 20, 2014 at 9:33 AM

John, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~