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Bottled Love

If I could bottle the love you show me I would take it to the ends of the Earth, to allow a Small amount to go free Releasing love, giving peace, to rebirth Every nation, all countries, state to state Spreading that loving feeling you expel from your heart, to generously create Peace on Earth, Everone under your spell, If You wrote poems of adoration I would send them to everyone on Earth Never mind colour, race, or religion Telling all how so much to me your worth You are my soul mate, my rock, my best friend My love for you will last until my end

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Date: 10/29/2017 10:12:00 AM
You do make this world a better place :) love this. xomo!
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Roy Pett
Date: 10/29/2017 10:49:00 AM
Thank you Maureen, I honestly wish I could make this a better world, but as long as we have hope one day the human race will irradiate tribalism and learn to love each other, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))
Date: 10/28/2017 5:27:00 AM
Excellent sonnet about devotion.. I like your style in this sonnet..
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Date: 10/28/2017 7:42:00 AM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment Silent one really appreciated. :))
Date: 10/27/2017 10:29:00 PM
Isn't amazing, how the love of just ONE special person, can spread so far, so wide, like a ripple effect. This is a beautiful loving sonnet, Roy.
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Roy Pett
Date: 10/28/2017 3:30:00 AM
Thank you so much Becca, this is special to me as I wrote it for a very special lady. thanks again, Roy. :))
Date: 1/5/2017 5:12:00 AM
Hiya Roy, I do like this one :) I find the thought of the bottle passing through the land and shore very relaxing, whilst spreading hopefulness & joy. I can see that your heart holds a very special place for your loved one, lovely words and sentiment.
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Roy Pett
Date: 1/5/2017 7:03:00 AM
Thank you very much Janet, I did write this for my lovely wife, so pleased you liked it, your support is much appreciated, Thanks again Roy.
Date: 11/29/2016 2:23:00 PM
great message for the world roy and ends with a personal touch stephen
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Roy Pett
Date: 11/29/2016 2:38:00 PM
Thank you very much Stephen for your very kind comment and encouragement.

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