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Bottled Feelings

bottled inside her

     suppressed years of frustration

               looming eruption

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/22/2014 8:44:00 AM

a lady volcano? strong magma. love. Enjoyed the haiku Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 10/22/2014 11:17:00 AM

Thank you Rajat....perhaps a female volcano can be worse than a male one! // paul

Angie Thomas

Date: 8/24/2014 11:46:00 AM

A short poem that beats a thousand words...

Paul Callus
Date: 8/24/2014 3:09:00 PM

Many thanks Angie; a person can only take so much...there has to be a safety valve somewhere! // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/21/2014 11:41:00 AM

Way to go with this great insight..Enjoyed reading your thoughts of wisdom..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 8/21/2014 4:10:00 PM

Thank you Sara; any visit from you is very welcome. Take care. // paul

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/2/2014 9:39:00 PM

Short good and to the point. We should be able to express our feelings, but it don't always happens like that... Lucilla

Paul Callus
Date: 8/3/2014 4:04:00 AM

Hello Lucilla. So lovely this Sunday morning to have you visiting! Your comments, as usual, are 'short and to the point' too:) Take care and God bless. // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 2:28:00 PM

Yes, I do love this one.. I hope this is the one you entered... :)

Paul Callus
Date: 7/29/2014 3:41:00 PM

Sorry to disappoint you...but I'm a romantic at heart, and cannot betray my first choice, even if this one sounds good. I'll stick by 'her' through thin and thick:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/26/2014 3:14:00 PM

I see two bottled up poems...:) I had to click on this one:) it's a WOW! of a KU.... Linda

Paul Callus
Date: 7/26/2014 4:07:00 PM

I get the feeling that you like this one:) Thank you Linda! You make a good judge:) // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2014 7:09:00 PM

this describes a great number of people, both women and men. WELL done.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/24/2014 2:51:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. Of course, it goes for both male and female, although in my write I refer to 'her'. Glad you like it. Have a nice day. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/22/2014 8:13:00 PM

this is better than the first hope this the one you enter :D

Paul Callus
Date: 7/23/2014 11:15:00 AM

So glad you like it Olive_eloi! But I still can't bring myself to ditch the first one! Your take on this theme is very original. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/22/2014 8:14:00 PM

better than mine too :D

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/22/2014 3:45:00 PM

Powerful Haiku!!Outstanding,So much said in few.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/22/2014 5:43:00 PM

Thank you Charm! This would be an ideal contest for you...haiku is on very good terms with you! // paul

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/22/2014 3:10:00 PM

wonderful! you've said so much in so few words...

Paul Callus
Date: 7/22/2014 3:19:00 PM

Hi Ilene! Welcome to my frustrated mind! I'm sure there are many around who can somehow relate to this feeling of frustration. Thanks for yet another lovely visit. // paul

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/22/2014 2:20:00 PM

This is terrific, original to say the least. You could always post this one instead..sorry, cant remember the other one, but my guess is it is good as well. BG

Paul Callus
Date: 7/22/2014 2:47:00 PM

I am so pleased you like this haiku, Barbara; my heart is torn between the two, but I just can't betray the first one that I posted! // paul

John Lawless

Date: 7/22/2014 2:11:00 PM

interesting take on the theme Paul. Good luck in the contest.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/22/2014 2:43:00 PM

Glad you find it of interest, John. Thank you for stopping by and commenting. // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/22/2014 1:36:00 PM

Hi Paul, this is outstanding! I love it!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/22/2014 2:42:00 PM

I'm glad you do, Pandita. I love both my 'bottle' poems, but unfortunately only one can be entered for the contest! be seeing you. // paul

Tim Smith

Date: 7/22/2014 1:12:00 PM

Love this one Paul...very creative...Tim

Paul Callus
Date: 7/22/2014 1:27:00 PM

Thank you Tim. I'm surprised this write did not come first to mind! That's what I now think, in retrospective...but that's how most things work. // paul