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Bottled Feelings

bottled inside her

     suppressed years of frustration

               looming eruption

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

October 22, 2014 at 8:44 AM

a lady volcano? strong magma. love. Enjoyed the haiku Paul

Paul Callus

October 22, 2014 at 11:17 AM

Thank you Rajat....perhaps a female volcano can be worse than a male one! // paul

Angie Thomas

August 24, 2014 at 11:46 AM

A short poem that beats a thousand words...

Paul Callus

August 24, 2014 at 3:09 PM

Many thanks Angie; a person can only take so much...there has to be a safety valve somewhere! // paul

Sara Kendrick

August 21, 2014 at 11:41 AM

Way to go with this great insight..Enjoyed reading your thoughts of wisdom..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Paul Callus

August 21, 2014 at 4:10 PM

Thank you Sara; any visit from you is very welcome. Take care. // paul

Lucilla Carrillo

August 2, 2014 at 9:39 PM

Short good and to the point. We should be able to express our feelings, but it don't always happens like that... Lucilla

Paul Callus

August 3, 2014 at 4:04 AM

Hello Lucilla. So lovely this Sunday morning to have you visiting! Your comments, as usual, are 'short and to the point' too:) Take care and God bless. // paul

Poet Destroyer A

July 29, 2014 at 2:28 PM

Yes, I do love this one.. I hope this is the one you entered... :)

Paul Callus

July 29, 2014 at 3:41 PM

Sorry to disappoint you...but I'm a romantic at heart, and cannot betray my first choice, even if this one sounds good. I'll stick by 'her' through thin and thick:)

Poet Destroyer A

July 26, 2014 at 3:14 PM

I see two bottled up poems...:) I had to click on this one:) it's a WOW! of a KU.... Linda

Paul Callus

July 26, 2014 at 4:07 PM

I get the feeling that you like this one:) Thank you Linda! You make a good judge:) // paul

Andrea Dietrich

July 23, 2014 at 7:09 PM

this describes a great number of people, both women and men. WELL done.

Paul Callus

July 24, 2014 at 2:51 AM

Thank you Andrea. Of course, it goes for both male and female, although in my write I refer to 'her'. Glad you like it. Have a nice day. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

July 22, 2014 at 8:13 PM

this is better than the first hope this the one you enter :D

Paul Callus

July 23, 2014 at 11:15 AM

So glad you like it Olive_eloi! But I still can't bring myself to ditch the first one! Your take on this theme is very original. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

July 22, 2014 at 8:14 PM

better than mine too :D

Charmaine Chircop

July 22, 2014 at 3:45 PM

Powerful Haiku!!Outstanding,So much said in few.

Paul Callus

July 22, 2014 at 5:43 PM

Thank you Charm! This would be an ideal contest for you...haiku is on very good terms with you! // paul

Ilene Bauer

July 22, 2014 at 3:10 PM

wonderful! you've said so much in so few words...

Paul Callus

July 22, 2014 at 3:19 PM

Hi Ilene! Welcome to my frustrated mind! I'm sure there are many around who can somehow relate to this feeling of frustration. Thanks for yet another lovely visit. // paul

Barbara Gorelick

July 22, 2014 at 2:20 PM

This is terrific, original to say the least. You could always post this one instead..sorry, cant remember the other one, but my guess is it is good as well. BG

Paul Callus

July 22, 2014 at 2:47 PM

I am so pleased you like this haiku, Barbara; my heart is torn between the two, but I just can't betray the first one that I posted! // paul

John Lawless

July 22, 2014 at 2:11 PM

interesting take on the theme Paul. Good luck in the contest.

Paul Callus

July 22, 2014 at 2:43 PM

Glad you find it of interest, John. Thank you for stopping by and commenting. // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

July 22, 2014 at 1:36 PM

Hi Paul, this is outstanding! I love it!

Paul Callus

July 22, 2014 at 2:42 PM

I'm glad you do, Pandita. I love both my 'bottle' poems, but unfortunately only one can be entered for the contest! be seeing you. // paul

Tim Smith

July 22, 2014 at 1:12 PM

Love this one Paul...very creative...Tim

Paul Callus

July 22, 2014 at 1:27 PM

Thank you Tim. I'm surprised this write did not come first to mind! That's what I now think, in retrospective...but that's how most things work. // paul