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Bottled Feelings

bottled inside her suppressed years of frustration looming eruption

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/22/2014 8:44:00 AM
a lady volcano? strong magma. love. Enjoyed the haiku Paul
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Date: 10/22/2014 11:17:00 AM
Thank you Rajat....perhaps a female volcano can be worse than a male one! // paul
Date: 8/24/2014 11:46:00 AM
A short poem that beats a thousand words...
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Date: 8/24/2014 3:09:00 PM
Many thanks Angie; a person can only take so much...there has to be a safety valve somewhere! // paul
Date: 8/21/2014 11:41:00 AM
Way to go with this great insight..Enjoyed reading your thoughts of wisdom..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 8/21/2014 4:10:00 PM
Thank you Sara; any visit from you is very welcome. Take care. // paul
Date: 8/2/2014 9:39:00 PM
Short good and to the point. We should be able to express our feelings, but it don't always happens like that... Lucilla
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Date: 8/3/2014 4:04:00 AM
Hello Lucilla. So lovely this Sunday morning to have you visiting! Your comments, as usual, are 'short and to the point' too:) Take care and God bless. // paul
Date: 7/29/2014 2:28:00 PM
Yes, I do love this one.. I hope this is the one you entered... :)
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Date: 7/29/2014 3:41:00 PM
Sorry to disappoint you...but I'm a romantic at heart, and cannot betray my first choice, even if this one sounds good. I'll stick by 'her' through thin and thick:)
Date: 7/26/2014 3:14:00 PM
I see two bottled up poems...:) I had to click on this one:) it's a WOW! of a KU.... Linda
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Date: 7/26/2014 4:07:00 PM
I get the feeling that you like this one:) Thank you Linda! You make a good judge:) // paul
Date: 7/23/2014 7:09:00 PM
this describes a great number of people, both women and men. WELL done.
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Date: 7/24/2014 2:51:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. Of course, it goes for both male and female, although in my write I refer to 'her'. Glad you like it. Have a nice day. // paul
Date: 7/22/2014 8:13:00 PM
this is better than the first hope this the one you enter :D
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Date: 7/23/2014 11:15:00 AM
So glad you like it Olive_eloi! But I still can't bring myself to ditch the first one! Your take on this theme is very original. // paul
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Date: 7/22/2014 8:14:00 PM
better than mine too :D
Date: 7/22/2014 3:45:00 PM
Powerful Haiku!!Outstanding,So much said in few.
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Date: 7/22/2014 5:43:00 PM
Thank you Charm! This would be an ideal contest for you...haiku is on very good terms with you! // paul
Date: 7/22/2014 3:10:00 PM
wonderful! you've said so much in so few words...
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Date: 7/22/2014 3:19:00 PM
Hi Ilene! Welcome to my frustrated mind! I'm sure there are many around who can somehow relate to this feeling of frustration. Thanks for yet another lovely visit. // paul
Date: 7/22/2014 2:20:00 PM
This is terrific, original to say the least. You could always post this one instead..sorry, cant remember the other one, but my guess is it is good as well. BG
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Date: 7/22/2014 2:47:00 PM
I am so pleased you like this haiku, Barbara; my heart is torn between the two, but I just can't betray the first one that I posted! // paul
Date: 7/22/2014 2:11:00 PM
interesting take on the theme Paul. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/22/2014 2:43:00 PM
Glad you find it of interest, John. Thank you for stopping by and commenting. // paul
Date: 7/22/2014 1:36:00 PM
Hi Paul, this is outstanding! I love it!
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Date: 7/22/2014 2:42:00 PM
I'm glad you do, Pandita. I love both my 'bottle' poems, but unfortunately only one can be entered for the contest! be seeing you. // paul
Date: 7/22/2014 1:12:00 PM
Love this one Paul...very creative...Tim
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Date: 7/22/2014 1:27:00 PM
Thank you Tim. I'm surprised this write did not come first to mind! That's what I now think, in retrospective...but that's how most things work. // paul
Date: 7/22/2014 10:48:00 AM
wonderful take on the theme Paul good luck with the contest. Hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/22/2014 11:26:00 AM
Thank you Jan...but this one is not for the contest...already posted one; this came along as a side-shoot. take care. /x/ paul