Bottle In the Ocean

Bottle in the ocean

An empty bottle sitting there on the table
She looks at it for hours
Grabs some papers and a pen
Staring at his photo on her phone
She's thinking, will it work 
So she writes a message on that paper
Saying

Baby, I am so deeply in love with you
I just want to be with you 
I wanna make the best love making with you 
For the rest of our lives
Baby, every breath I take is for you to breath
Every heartbeat I have 
Is for you to feel and hear as your head lays on my chest
I had never ever loved anyone 
Like I truly love you right here right now
For the rest of our lives
Your my whole world 
Doesn't matter where in this world you are
Because you are always with me 
Baby hurry and get back home to me really soon
Love you so much 
Your princess

She kisses the paper 
Rolls it up as small as she can
Slips it in the glass bottle puts the top on tightly 
She takes it to the ocean
She closes her eyes and she prays 

Dear God,
Please let this message in this bottle 
Get to the person that it is ment to read it
Let him bring it back home to me when he comes
Amen

She then stars at his photo on her phone 
While she is hugging the bottle 
She then walks right up to the edge of the ocean
She takes the bottle and she throws it in
There it goes
She watches the bottle drifts away in the ocean 
She stays there until she no longer sees it
That is what you call a
Bottle in the ocean
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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