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Written 9th July 2023

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Bottle Gardens

Some pigeons pooped in the bottle garden Without as much as “I beg your pardon” Did loop the loop afore plopping their poop In the neck of the bottle with one swoop. It is clear that it does cometh to pass Bottle gardens become mucky morass For onto those bottles of flora, alas Pigeons ejectamenta en mass.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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August 2, 2023 at 6:25 AM
Those pigeons have no respect for bottle gardens,whenever they feel the need its bombs away.
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August 2, 2023 at 9:44 AM
Too right brother John, this is just a fun write not to be taken seriously, though pesky pigeons drop their poops wherever it suits… Sis Belle
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July 15, 2023 at 6:25 AM
Ha ha ha, LOVE this - a sure winner (well, if I were the judge)
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August 2, 2023 at 9:44 AM
Thank you Jack, I’m pleased you saw the humour in this write… Belle
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July 14, 2023 at 12:58 PM
Lol, sounds like they are playing a game of who can hit the bulls-eye! I have been so embarrassed by some of the birds who are swooping and pooping on my car. There is a tree over my driveway, if I can't get the car hosed down before we have to drive, if is mortifying! Anyway, maybe hawks are not so bad after all, when you think about it...I hate to see the birds end in a sad feast in a hawk's clutches, but sometimes!!?! :) <3
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August 2, 2023 at 9:41 AM
Bird poop can be so annoying especially when they are flying. I dislike birds being a sad feast too, it’s nature and nothing can anyone do. Thank you BJ… Belle
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July 11, 2023 at 5:26 AM
Lol, Pigeons taking target practice in the bottle garden! Nicely penned Belle
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July 11, 2023 at 6:46 PM
Thank you very much indeed Joseph. Blessings Belle
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July 9, 2023 at 9:44 PM
I hate pigeons they dirty my pavement. But I can bear to kill them, getting in a bottle garden must have made quite a mess, but I freed them. Lovely take on the contest best of luck. Hugs xx
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July 11, 2023 at 6:45 PM
Hi Victor, pigeons do make a mess, but to kill them would be an evil thing to do nevertheless. Thank you, Belle. (I’m sure I replied to your comment before and it’s disappeared, have noticed it’s happened to my replies to others too.)
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July 9, 2023 at 7:57 PM
Belle, your poem is an exquisite manifestation of beauty, one that I cannot help but find uproariously amusing - a testament to the whimsical nature of life's intricacies.
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July 9, 2023 at 8:16 PM
Bless you Sotto, thank you… Belle
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July 9, 2023 at 3:49 PM
haha. Such a funny one!!
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July 9, 2023 at 5:47 PM
Thank you Andrea, pleased you were amused by the read… Belle
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July 9, 2023 at 2:09 PM
Belle, a great poem, hilarious, love the "ejectamenta" adjective too!
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July 9, 2023 at 5:46 PM
Thank you Tania, pleased you found this amusing and liked the word “ejectamenta” too… Belle
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July 9, 2023 at 11:32 AM
A fun/creative write. Now we have the official bathroom for the pigeons. Your "Bottle Gardens" jar. Do you furnish toilet paper??? Have a fun day.........
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July 9, 2023 at 1:43 PM
Thank you Paula for joining in the fun, not sure about toilet paper for a pigeon’s bum. Hope your new week is full of fun… Belle
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July 9, 2023 at 11:00 AM
OH MY GOODNESS, Belle. You have no idea how hilarious I find your pigeon poop poem! I'm sure a few others who've entered will, too.
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July 9, 2023 at 1:40 PM
Thank you Lin I’m pleased you had a laugh at the read… Belle
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July 9, 2023 at 11:24 AM
Belle, you need to enter this in the humour contest as well as bottle garden lol
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July 9, 2023 at 11:08 AM
HA HA Jan. I'm still laughing. Oh, the timing of them both!
Allison Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 11:05 AM
between Belle's poem and the humour blog i may need to change my panties lol:-) talk about PMSL lol
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July 9, 2023 at 10:55 AM
hahahaha hahaha dont bottle it Belle - do enter it in the renamed (away in) now bottle garden contest. crying with laughter here
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July 9, 2023 at 11:42 AM
I have entered this into the contest Jan, you and Lin had me crying with laughter with your entries too, what a hoot… Belle
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