Bottle Bank Slam

A bottle

With a message for world 
inside it

Washes up in a see- through bay

Ever so slowly subsidise into
it's golden sand by the lapping
tide

Wishes only to be seen and to
fulfill it's journey or mission

The only question is will it be
found in time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Rodrigues Avatar
February 6, 2021 at 9:03 PM
Enjoyed!
Flaherty Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 12:17 PM
Cheers Kim Ditto Enjoy your comments
Proxenos Avatar
February 6, 2021 at 11:19 AM
I hope we all survive Jonathan, and that your bottle will reach the shores of a far away land and picked up by a friend, who will become a friend indeed! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Flaherty Avatar
February 6, 2021 at 7:53 PM
Cheers Jen Baie dankie mev
Downing  Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 3:02 PM
I just read on fb a few months ago about a teenager threw bottle with her note in it, two years ago and just 3months or so ago landed on of the small islands in the pacific. The founder and writer now very good friends. I hope yours find its way to a great pair of hands :)
Flaherty Avatar
February 6, 2021 at 7:53 PM
Cheers Akkina thank you very much indeed
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