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both talking neither listening

my telephone pal and I speak at each other daily neither of us listens but we know when to pause and pretend I speak of my garden tomatoes, radishes, carrots, lettuce she speaks of her granddaughter Gigi pretty, perfect, smart, wise, wonderful Gigi I will send you a photo she says I get a photo of Gigi She gets a photo of my garden she yaps, I yap Pausing at the right places pretending we are listening. both of us talking no one listening

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Date: 11/6/2024 6:38:00 PM
Well written! I suppose it should be sad that no one is listening, but the humor throughout - such as sending a photo of your garden in return for the photo of Gigi - makes me smile at the silly little things we do.
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