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Borrowed Laughter

You always see me smile As if, I’m not traveling in a ghastly mile, As if, I don’t have problems in a file If you only knew that, this is just guile. You always see me relax As if, I don’t care with the death’s package box, As if I’m not scared with the God o death—and the axe. If you only knew, I am wearing the mask of fox. You always see me happy As if, I don’t feel any misery, As if I don’t know any agony If you only knew, my heart and soul are not that healthy. You don’t see me explode in anger Not even, hear that I experience hunger, If you only knew, my dear All I have is a borrowed laughter. 01232004---03:59 pm

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Date: 3/23/2016 10:08:00 PM
Jinque, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 4/17/2019 11:04:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 1/16/2016 6:05:00 PM
jinque, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT**
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Date: 3/26/2021 11:00:00 PM
Yay! Big thanks!
Date: 1/16/2014 12:31:00 AM
Hi Jinque - powerful poem you have here. 'Borrowed laughter' - the title meshes well with the theme. It's easy to think all is fine when we see people laugh - this reminds us to look beyond the laughter. Very well written. I would like to extend my hand in welcome to the PoetrySoup community. There’s a lot to learn from each other here and hopefully you will have a great time while at it. Feel free to drop me a line when you can. I am looking forward to reading more from you. Vicky.
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Date: 3/26/2021 11:01:00 PM
Hi! Vicky. I appreciated your kind words. Have a wonderful day!
Date: 1/3/2014 9:18:00 AM
a perfect words for a hidden pain.. this is awesome, Jinque!!! :) nice poem...^__^ always, AiyaH =))
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Date: 4/17/2019 11:05:00 PM
thank you for your kind words.

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