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I’ve written a few poems with idiom titles! Wherever the muse takes me. Enjoy!

Born With Two Left Feet

she’s never been right, tripping over everyone’s laces. it’s like a laser field, where she bumps into every bruise. she ducks and limps, with charlie brown, circling bases. her braids tangled and barely reaching the rescuing prince. to make matters worse, he plucks grays as he makes his ascent. her head aches, with every step of the ladder, making him wince. so shy, she hides under a contrasting red hood and cape. why does she always invite the hairy ones to join her? this one has wide eyes and snarly teeth — an audacious ape. they go swimming and she bobs under the dangerous dock. her fin fits way too tight, cutting off common sense circulation. yet, with wisdom lacking, he sinks as she hands him a rock. she blames herself, as another one cuts himself with slipper shard. racing away, from what will be disastrous, she thumbs for a carriage. her heart racing with every bump, knowing life will always be hard. the moral of this acrobatic feat, encouraging dragons - fire and all, if she’d only been born right, perhaps there’d be someone left, but under this royal beauty’s curse, into normal life she’d never fall. 2/13/2018
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Gauthier Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 3:49 PM
Enjoyable read, Kim. Congrats on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 4:53 PM
Thanks, my always encouraging friend!
Cunningham Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 3:40 AM
Congrats Kim. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 3:08 PM
Thanks, Tom!
Haight Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:55 PM
I really enjoyed reading your poem, Kim! Very imaginative! Congratulations on your win in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 3:08 PM
Thanks, Sandra!
Talbot Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 2:28 PM
Very impressive, can't think who in the first one? The second, 'Romeo and Juliet'. The third, 'Little Red Riding Hood'. The fourth? The fifth, Cinderella, and the sixth, 'King Arthur and the Round Table', 99% sure. En cor! Mick
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 3:34 PM
Thanks, Mick! Enjoyed reading your comment :)
Gentile Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 12:33 PM
Well this could be the sequel to "into the woods" Great imaginative poem, Kim!!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 3:34 PM
Thanks so much, Mike! :) Kim
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