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Poetic Form: Dramatic Monologue
Inspired: 2024 July 12
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Statuesque breaths of blossoming beauty bearing thorns. Flowing fullness of fragrant flowery affairs sheathing weeds. Without human intervention, such is the truth of nature, such are the facts of life. According to the scriptures, angels are not earthbound lest they are tasked by Heaven's will. I, like my family, had fine points and faults, I did good and I did bad, and I did my best to right my wrongs and correct my mistakes like my family did when they were earthbound. I have painted the truth and not tainted it with flowery falsifications. My family and I were never angels on earth because we were never tasked for Heaven's sake. I am earthbound and therefore taxed by my will which is my thorns and weeds, albeit, I am constant in prayer, to flower and bloom in hope and faith. So my family were never angels then, but now-- no longer earthbound--my entire family are all angels, ... except me. I am still earthbound, amidst my thorns and weeds, and my flowers and blossoms. By Heaven's will, I am still grounded (bears somewhat to my parents once termed) I will continue to shine in the Light of Truth, Signed the blessed sinner, Amen.

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Date: 7/12/2024 10:48:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your write. Great Ending.... Have a great day.......................
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/12/2024 11:02:00 AM
Paula, you're a saint as I see it in your words, and that's the truth, I can tell--he says in joyful laughter, Aloha William

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