Born: 1980 - Detroit, Michigan

Our old Plymouth wagon sits junked in the yard
Collecting pine needles and rust
Ten years of abuse and driven too hard
Now an eyesore, the neighbors might fuss

Chrysler Corporation was not at their best
Before Iacocca, I think
"Car lot got flooded but we did a road test."
The salesman said with a wink

A knock on the door, 'Wanna' sell that ole wreck?
I live down 'ar  right crost the creek'
"How much?" 'Thirty bucks!' "Okay, what the heck?"
(He stuffs some more Skoal in his cheek)

"Whatcha' do with 'em?" I ask. 'Crush 'em!' He hacks
And spats on a flat balding tire
'Front 'uns look good, we'll haul 'er from the back
Now what did I do with my pliers?"

'Anything in 'ar you might wanna' keep?'
(The door handle sticky with sap)
A moldy child's baseball glove on the back seat
And a faded old little league cap

Slowly the wrecker-hearse jacks up the rear
It snaps and it groans in protest
"Thirty pieces, that's all? Please let me stay here
I'm tired and I just need to rest"

(It's backwards I tell you, something's not right
With the way that old car's being towed
So lonesome it looks, its hazy headlights
Staring sadly down at the road)

N/A in contest 'Pick a Title' judged on 11/13/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Martin Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Great poem - feel for the car! Congratulations Tim! :-)
A  Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 3:32 PM
Sad for the car
Oyewole Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 12:22 PM
Congrats on your win.
Jones Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 5:46 AM
Ahhhhh.I know how you feel...as my poor old blue poem....boo hoo .....enjoyed this
Bauer Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 4:06 AM
i love this poem! you've managed to combine both pathos and humor in a wonderful way and i felt your sadness as the car was being towed away. great job!
Mannan Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 10:49 PM
Many congrats for this win.
A   Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 10:00 PM
Congratulations TIM:-) thanks for taking your time entering my contest. Goodnight~ LINDA
Brown Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 6:35 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Tim. It is an honor to be on the list with you this week. May you find the inspiration to keep you writing. Love, Carol
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 3:54 PM
Congrats on this story well told being featured. Vince
Mehta Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 9:15 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Tim
Golden Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 8:26 AM
You're a great storyteller, Tim. You're so good, in fact, that I'm going to be late for church if I don't get of this silly computer!! Anyway...this piece is rich in story and creates just the right mood. Well done! Hugs, Donna
Owens Avatar
September 13, 2009 at 7:20 PM
What deep meanings you have in your poems. Sold for 30 pieces of silver. I can see it. THanks. Marty
Richards Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 3:29 PM
Loved this charming poem....poor old clunker....so sad to be going to the wrecking yard...perhaps? Great write !! :)
Kendrick Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 6:01 AM
This is an interesting poem. I could glean several different meaning here. Keep writing. Sara
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace