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Boring Brown

I always wanted deep blue eyes
Or the green of forestry 
But all I got was boring brown
As plain as plain could be.
Boring brown and dark as earth
With not a hint of light
Not bright or spark could ever be
In eyes as dark as mine

Till one day, I met a girl
With the brightest eyes I’ve seen
They shone right through the darkness
And shined as brilliant as stars could be

But her soul within had lost all light
And her veins would flow with ice
Her heart beat not for love nor hope
And her blue eyes would never bleed

I realized now I’d rather have
The eyes as dark as mine
That proved my soul could still be seen
Behind the drapes it hides

So I wished not
For forestry
Or the oceans of the deep
Instead I wished
Others would see
The life and soul in me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/10/2016 5:15:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful write!
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Date: 9/29/2016 11:50:00 AM
Lovely. You were able to see the beauty in brown after all.
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