Len Gasun Poet Blank verse

Boredom

If there’s something that will drive me crazy
And if there’s something that makes me insane
It’s just boredom that will put me in shame

Boredom only offers wilted flowers
I’ll just crave,  making me a hungry girl
Showing me the dark sky for star to search

Like holding all plain black and white photos
A vegetating state making me blues
I would rather shave and paint my eyebrows

All alone or with friends doing nothing
Or an ending repetitions, refrain
I’ll squirm out from grip of this banal state

But boredom is wild, now hiding from me
So scared of my repellents -my hobbies
Creativity will drive it away


 March 5, 2023      9.24am





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110 words
150 syllables
653 characters


B--Forms and Words
Contest Judged:  4/2/2023 10:57:00 AM
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet 
Place  8 (up to 10 single w)

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Paula Goldsmith April 3, 2023 at 2:47 PM Congratulations on your win. What a fun write. Say Yes, to Creativity and No to Boredom. Hooray!!! Enjoy your win with blessings................ Len Gasun April 4, 2023 at 12:54 AM Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting comment and your congatulatory greetings my dear poet sis and friend Paula. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Sotto Poet April 2, 2023 at 11:17 AM Len, congratulations on your well-deserved win. Your poem is fantastic; it appears that every word is written with rhythm. Len Gasun April 4, 2023 at 12:53 AM Thank you so much for your acknowledgment and approval on my poem thru my win my dear poet friend/sir. It means a lot to me. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Kelly Deschler March 22, 2023 at 7:48 AM Creativity will always drive away boredom and there are so many ways to let creativity blossom, just as you have done with this poem... Really well written and expressed, my friend... My best wishes for the contest! Len Gasun March 25, 2023 at 6:04 PM Thank you for reading my poem, your uplifting words and best wishes my dear friend Kelly. My best wishes to you always too. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Victor Buhagiar March 11, 2023 at 1:06 AM A poem that makes you think. Len Gasun March 11, 2023 at 1:15 AM Thanks for reading again my poem for the second time my dear friend Vic. Sorry, no time or muse to write a new one yet, since I'm still occupied with unfinished school assignments. Just came to read you and other's here while taking a short break. Have a great day. Hugs

Charles Messina March 10, 2023 at 9:59 AM I love this, Len. Well-written. Though one line in particular stands out for me. "I would rather shave and paint my eyebrows" When I was 15 yrs old I was drunk and shaved my eyebrows for $20.00 (lol) Hugs Charlie Len Gasun March 10, 2023 at 11:53 PM Ha ha ha ha, I hope you didn't have any regret shaving your eyebrows my dear friend Charles. Thanks for reading my poem and your uplifting words. Blessings to you always. Hugs

Victor Buhagiar March 5, 2023 at 8:26 AM Great poem. I cannot write blank verse. I tried once and failed. Len Gasun March 8, 2023 at 6:29 PM Maybe you can if you keep on trying my dear friend Vic. Actually this is my first try of this form. Thank you for reading my poem and your uplifting comment. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs